Ornament - Freewrite Poetry

in #freewritepoetrydigest6 years ago (edited)

Ornament

She was made of glass,
shimmering in the morning sun,
icy chill in the winter;
Her liquid center swirled like Orion on a hot summer night.
With Northern lights,
fidelity and rules that can't be penned,
she was hard, clear and unforgiving.
But when she was dropped
we watched in horrid fascination
the spider veins edging up her sides.
She was cracking up,
and rolling down.
There were none to spare.
Shattered, scattered,
she aligned.

Janelle G.
@wandrnrose7


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Ah I thought I knew where this was going and what it was but when she was dropped it became very powerful in a different direction. Love - Carl

Thank you for reading, Carl. What a pleasure to receive your feedback. ❤

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As always, your poetry is beautiful!! Happy belated Thanksgiving 👍😀❤️

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Thank you 🤗 It was quite filling.

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I don't get over to read nearly enough of your poetry anymore. But when I do see it I always enjoy it so much. This piece is wonderful!

I really appreciate your encouragement 🤗...thank you.

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Beautiful poem. With deep meaning I suppose. Glad you had a meal with family. Take care ❤️


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