5 Minute Freewrite Wednesday monkey

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

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Kelly and Chozzy may be making a comeback. Thank you
@whatisnew for the idea. :-)
....
One day they let us all be outside much longer than usual. It was
super warm and sunny. They said that maybe the heat from the
sun will make our body too hot to fight off the changes they say
should have happened.
The man at the fence hid in the shade and talked.

"Why are you helping us, I asked."

"Because there are not many who believed me when I knew there
was something weird going on at my other job."

"What kind of job?"

"I worked at a zoo. I helped take care of the animals."

"Why did you quit?"

"Because I couldn't take it anymore with watching this crazy monkey
named Chozzy. He was strange and nobody believed me. That
monster is here some place, I sense it."

"What was he doing?"

"He killed birds to feed a lion....
...
Here are some of the past stories where this one originated from.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@pixiehunter/5-minute-freewrite-friday-plaid-blanket
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@pixiehunter/weekend-freewrite-of-3-3-18
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@pixiehunter/5-minute-freewrite-monday
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@pixiehunter/5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-deodorize

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I love how you wrote both of them in. "That monster is here some place, I sense it." Does that mean that Chozzy will return? Only time will tell I suppose. : )

Indeed it will. :-)

@pixiehunter ...awesome writing...the lines are few though, but are meaningfull...especially these lines.."Because there are not many who believed me when I knew there
was something weird going on at my other job." Sounds great... Thankyou

Very nice. Makes you anticipate the next scene. Thanks!

Today's prompt is a picture, so see what you can do with this one. Here is the prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-147-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-see-below

Where is he? Can't one never get rid of the crazy monkeys?

Only time will tell when I do these freewrites. :-) But I have a plan that will blow the Chozzy fans away. :-)

ha. Can't wait :)

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