It Is Time For The Freewrite To End VIII (The Last Mole)
The Story So Far
The warehouse toilet was was blown up (with Mr Indigo, but there was no body). The Riviera Hounds have decided to move to a nice house overlooking the sea. Their main objective is to destroy the freewrite group.
Meanwhile, Mr Neil has managed to hide the group with the help of Detective Chief Inspector Pulp. They have been given fake I.D. and new names.
Mrs Black now enlists the help of someone experienced to help train Miss Rose in the ways of the mole.
You can read Episode 7 here
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-freewrite-to-end-vii-who-are-you
Or you can read the Omnibus edition featuring Episodes 1-7.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-freewrite-to-end-omnibus-parts-1-7
Episode 8: The Last Mole
A man appears at the door.
“Who are you?” asks Miss Rose.
“Mike.”
“Shouldn’t you be Mr Mike?” asks Mr Neil.
“No, not Mr Mike. But you can call me Mr Indigo.”
“So Mr Indigo, what’s your story?” asks Mrs Black.
“If there is no body then there is no death. We do need to act quickly, The Riviera Hounds will soon have a new base and they will be working to root out the freewrite. Are you ready for your training Miss Rose?”
One week later
Mr White. Mr Black, Mr Green, Mr Grey and Mr Green have been enjoying their new home, overlooking the sea, in Torquay. It has been a week since they moved in.
Mr White enters, “Ok lads, we’ve had a week to settle in, we better get on with our mission. We need to destroy the freewrite group.”
“How will we find them?” asks Mr Green.
A mobile phone rings, it belongs to Mr White. “Thank you sir, text me the details. We’ll be leaving tonight.”
There is a look of anticipation amongst the group. “Pack your bags, we’re off to Dubai. We leave in 2 hours.”
“Ok, sir” says Mr Brown. “Just one thing. We have the satellite TV coming soon. Shall we wait for them?”
“Unless Liverpool are playing Manchester United next weekend, I think we can wait for the satellite TV.”
“Well that’s the thing,” replied Mr Brown. “Liverpool are playing Manchester United on Sunday.”
“OK boys. We leave in 4 hours.”
The bell rings. Mr Brown opens the door.
“Hello, I’m here to fit the satellite TV. I’m Mrs Sky.”
“Fantastic, how long will you be?” asks Mr White. “We’re going on holiday.”
“I won’t be long sir. There is a dish already up. I just need to connect the receiver.”
Mrs Sky fits the receiver. It only takes about 30 minutes.
“Ok, all done sir, can you sign the sheet?”
“No problem,” responds Mr White.
“Are you going anywhere nice?” asks Mrs Sky.
“Dubai, we’ll need to take care of business first, then we’ll have a look at the sights.”
“Ok, have a nice time.” Mrs Sky then leaves.
Mr White addresses the group. We has a computer and projector.
“Thank you Mr Brown for the computer and projector. I know exactly where the freewrite group is. They are hiding in Dubai. I have the address details here. They have assumed new identities. They have fake IDs and are all known as Smith. We must act quickly. We leave straight away for the airport and we should arrive in Dubai tomorrow morning. We will then kill the Smiths.”
There is another ring at the door. Mr Brown answers?
“Hello, I’m Charlie, I want to feature your house on a TV show that I’m presenting, about houses by the sea.”
“Who is it?” shouts Mr White.
“It’s a guy called Charlie,” replied Mr Brown “He wants to feature the house on a TV program, about houses by the sea”
“He’s probably a mole,” shouts Mr White “Kill him.”
To be continued
Episode 9 has arrived
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-for-the-freewrite-to-end-ix-the-time-has-come
Miss Rose is played by @wandrnrose7
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upvoted! interesting story. you should name them in parts or have a post of all the past parts in links. this makes it easy for someone new like me to get caught up from the beginning
Here's a omnibus edition, parts 1-7
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-freewrite-to-end-omnibus-parts-1-7
I'm glad you enjoyed it
Or you can read Part 1 and follow the links after each episode
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-freewrite-to-end-5-minute-freewrite
I am planning on taking your advice.
The short story picked up slowly but the end was a brutal surprise! Can't wait for the next part!
Thank you, I see this as the beginning of the next act. I nearly cut out the first bit to focus on the bad guys, but decided I will keep it.
That is a pretty neat freewrite! Looking forward to more from you!
This is the first time to try writing a series. It is a challenge but also a lot of fun. Thank you. I hope you enjoy more. :-)
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