It Is Time For The For The Freewrite To End IX (The Time Has Come)

in #freewrite8 years ago (edited)

The story so far

The Riviera Hounds are living in a nice house overlooking the sea, Torquay, England. They are however about to leave for Dubai.

They have found out where the freewrite group are hiding. They will be wasting no time in trying to kill them.

There was a slight delay, as they had to wait for Mrs Sky to install their satellite TV system. This was followed by another knock at the door.

You can the previous episode here
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-freewrite-to-end-viii-the-last-mole

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Episode 9: It Is Time

“Hello, I’m Charlie, I want to feature your house on a TV show that I’m presenting, about houses by the sea.”

“Who is it?” shouts Mr White.

“It’s a guy called Charlie,” replied Mr Brown “He wants to feature the house on a TV programme, about houses by the sea”

“He’s probably a mole,” shouts Mr White “Kill him.”

“No, he really is the presenter of a TV programme about houses by the sea,” replied Mr Brown, “I'm always watching it.”

Mr White walks to the door. He takes his hand out of his pocket. He then reaches it out to Charlie for a handshake.

“Welcome Charlie, don’t worry, we’re not going to kill you. We’re just having a laugh. We went to the theatre last night, we like a bit of drama. I’m afraid that your timing is bad, we’re off on holiday.”

“Somewhere nice I hope,” replies Charlie.

“Yeah mate, we’re off to Dubai. Come back in one weeks time and we’ll see what we can do.”

“Ok,” replies Charlie. “See you next week.”

24 hours later, and the Hounds have arrived in Dubai. They have booked into their hotel and it is time for the briefing.

“We will waste no more time. I have the address here. It is the villa down the road from ‘The Big Paint Company.’ Five of us is not enough, so I have a contact who has provided us with more numbers. They're called the Joneses. I will explain more on the bus.”

The Hounds make their way to the entrance of the hotel and enter a yellow school bus.

“Good afternoon Hounds, we're the Joneses.”

This is the leader of the gang, Mr Jones. He is accompanied by another nine assassins. Mr Jones shows a box to Mr White.

“Ok Mr White, have a look at this.”

His eyes light up. In the box, there are plenty of weapons including machine guns and hand grenades.

The yellow school bus arrives outside the villa.

“Ok, this is it boys, show no mercy. It is time for the freewrite to end.”

The bus door opens.

They charge towards the house. The door has been left unlocked. They enter the villa and all shout loudly.

However, the next thing Mr White will feel is shock, then anger.

“Where are they? Where are they?”

“Gone,” replied Mr Brown. “They were here. They knew we were coming.”

“How?” shouts Mr White. “How did they know?”

To be continued

You don't have to wait. Here is Episode 10.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-freewrite-to-end-x-immediately

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Mr. White seems like a very paranoid person! I'm just now jumping into your story so I'll have to read the previous installments to get some context on what's going on!


Also, please check out my post detailing a day in Venice, Italy during my backpacking trip in the Summer of 2014 =)

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mkkenny13/dailyfreewritechallenge-day-116-canal

Ha ha! You will never find us!!! You don't know the next prompt, we are always one freewrite ahead!!!

You got saved. The question is, who saved you? I've written part 10 but it will be posted tomorrow.

The Shimmer!

Ok @simgirl. I need an action character. Would you like to be in the story? We'll need a character name with Miss or Mrs. Maybe Miss Simgirl. :-)

I would love to be in the story!!!

Thank you @wandrnrose7 for saving us all!!! Your sacrifice is highly appreciated!! 😄

The one thing I will reveal; originally this part ended when the Hounds were about to go into the house. But it felt too dark to leave it that way.

Where you going to blow up the hounds or kill the freewriters? 😱

No, :-) The outcome would have been the same, but the last part was intended for the next episode.

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Nice post.. :D

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