Day 78, Prompt: Pen - 5 Minute Freewrite Challange

in #freewrite7 years ago

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He threw the pen across the room. The silence was deafening and he couldn't take it anymore. For days he's tried but for days he's failed. He couldn't do it, he couldn't finish what he'd started. His whole life had revolved around himself but now it was time to think about someone else.

The stress was building and he could feel his heart fading.
Why had he been so selfish? He still loved her and didn't want to let her go, but it was too late.
Too late to change what he'd done, and too late to learn right from wrong.

The pen laid lifeless on the hardwood floor, it's stillness calming. He stared at it, wanting it to bring him some hope, anything. But what could it do, it was a pen? He felt foolish and started to get angry again.

He grabbed the pen and tossed it on the table, the divorce papers stared at him like a principle stared at an unacceptable student.

But his heart was empty. All the love, all the hope he had once had, was gone.

This time his heart faded, forever.

Thanks for reading!

This was my third attempt at #freewriting with a 5 minute limit. I'm really enjoying it and finding I can write more creatively then I first thought! If you're interested in the freewrite challange make sure to check it out: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-78-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-pen

Don't forget to check back in on Monday for Chapter Three of my short story!

Until next time,

Meliss

Photo Cred: http://www.divorcemind.com/divorce-attorney/

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Such a sad story. Great use of the pen prompt!

Thank you!! :)

Great story. Well written.

Thank you!

I'm glad to see that you're joining in on the #dailyfreewritechallenge =)


I'm starting to fall in love with the concept of doing a daily #freewrite. Check out my latest #freewrite (Day 78 - Pen) and let me know what you think =)


https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mkkenny13/dailyfreewrite-challenge-day-78-pen

I'm starting to love it too!! Of course I'll check yours out :) I've been meaning to read through everyone's but finding the time if difficult!

haha i understand that! There's definitely life beyond Steem

I really liked it! especially... "the divorce papers stared at him like a principle stared at an unacceptable student". Keep it up @mel1ss!

Thank you @jbcoin! It's actually really interesting what your mind comes up with when you've only got 5 minutes to write haha

Yeah I'm not sure about the 5 min challenge lol! I'd probably either have a blank screen that just says "Duck" on it, or maybe write something great, who knows? The Pressure.

It is funny which path each person takes with their Prompt word. Lots of great stories!!

Please find the time to enter this contest @mel1ss, if you're interested? With a girl's perspective on jewelry and fashion, your writing skills, and just a little research, I think you could win? Sorry, being nice again...I know.

https://steemit.com/steem/@goldmatters/what-in-the-world-is-mene-24-karat-gold-and-platinum-investment-jewelry-100-steem-giveaway-part-i

Thank you! I'll definitely give it a go :) Not much of a jewellery person but hey I'll try! You're definitely too nice to me haha

Nope, just watching out for opportunities @mel1ss, 25 Steem is good money, I got faith in ya! Do your homework and online research, look for the stuff that the other entrants may have missed, put your spin onit 😉.

That's more than $150, write it like you've already won it. Remember the rules, how is Mene disrupting the jewelry industry?

Check your steemchat for some rules, thanks

Hi Meliss! Very deep and touching third freewrite..keep up the good work!
I don't think that his heart is empty because he understood that in life you have to forget about your ego at times and give to the others..

Today I wore on my face a @mariannewest mask and - trying to reproduce her charming voice - I'm happy to proclaim that on this weekend you have the following options!

You have the choice of a single prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-1-6-2018-single-prompt-option

Or you can get adventurous and weave three 5minute freewrites into one story starting with this prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-1-6-2018-part-1-the-first-sentence

Welcome to the freewriters :D

Loved your story!!

*Sorry I'm out of VP but really wanted to come read everyone's #freewrites.

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