5min free write "A Red Scarf" #freewrite

in #freewrite7 years ago (edited)

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They saw it from the ski lift, lost in the snow: a bright red scarf. Somebody must've dropped it.

Once at the top of the mountain, Tammy noticed a small family and pointed them out to her companion Michael. Two impatient parents were trying to deal with their crying daughter.

"Well if you don't know how to hang on to your things then there's not much we can do about it, is there?" Her mother was berating her, as the father shifted in his skis, ready to go.

Tammy and Michael looked at each other. But before they could do anything the family was gone, mother dragging her bare necked daughter down the hill.

Halfway down, Tammy found the scarf. People in the ski lift stared judgementally at her as she picked it up. Why hadn't the parents gone to fetch it?

They dropped it off at the chalet and hoped for the best.



Written in five minutes from the writing prompt, "A Red Scarf" as part of the #freewrite exercise. You can view the prompt here and check out the other entries; they go as high as an alpine ridge. Thanks to @mariannewest for creating and running this snuggly warm writing challenge.

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So sorry about the error; so that's why I had to create a link for it instead of it working automatic. I'll go back and fix it on the other posts as well.

no problem :)

Went back and fixed as many as I could, seems after seven days posts are uneditable... If you check this post https://steemit.com/freewrite/@fireawaymarmot/5-min-freewrite-prompt-the-taste-of-chicken you'll see that the link works in spite of wrong spelling - so it still goes to you. I have a habit of creating extra work for myself when I don't pay attention!

Thank you!! I didn't expect you to fix the old ones :)

I do the same - mix up letters and such. No worries.....

Nice writing. I feel bad for the little girl, though! Good writing evokes emotion, and you've done that well!

I am so sad for the little girl. Glad that Tammy picked it up!1
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