5 min Writing Prompt "Mason Jar" #freewrite serial Chapter Twenty Seven

in #freewrite7 years ago (edited)

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It is with the greatest regret that I apologize, for accusing you of leaving me. I know that you didn't leave, that you were forced away… And as I sit here in this gilded cage that these conspirators have made for me I know that I am wrong, so very wrong to be angry with you...
But angry is what I am. For how could you have let me them do this to us? You were a warrior, don't you remember? A warrior. And without shedding a single drop of blood, these people have managed to take away everything that we had and cast you adrift on the seas of history. And for what? For you to forget who you are and wander the world, aimlessly lost and alone, while I sit here next to your empty throne, mocked by those who won by losing?
And what is there for them in their Pyrrhic victory? No more than the bitter taste of satisfied resentment, turning inwards before my very eyes. I watch as they consume themselves and each other and I know that this is for the best, but all the more I dare not lose hope, that through all of this there will come a day when I will see you regained to your rightful place, to our rightful place, side by side, together.
Return to me, my love. Remember...
Remember who you are



Twenty Seventh chapter in an ongoing serial based on @mariannewest's daily #freewrite writing prompts. Here are the previous chapters listed below:

Chapter One>Chapter Two>Chapter Three>Chapter Four
Chapter Five>Chapter Six>Chapter Seven>Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine>Chapter Ten>Chapter Eleven>Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen>Chapter Fourteen>Chapter Fifteen>Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen>Chapter Eighteen>Chapter Nineteen>Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty One>Chapter Twenty Two>Chapter Twenty Three>Chapter Twenty Four
Chapter Twenty Five>Chapter Twenty Six


This Concludes the First Act in This Ongoing Freewrite Serialized Story. The Second Act Will Begin With Monday's Prompt



Written in five minutes from the writing prompt, "Mason Jar" as part of the #freewrite exercise. Image is by me as well. You can view the prompt here and check out the other entries; each one is a message in a mason jar sent out across the vast sea of the internet, waiting for that fateful day when you come across it washed up on the shore of your beaches. Thanks to @mariannewest for creating and running this well sealed note to Steemit.

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Wow! That was Awesome!!!! Thank you so much for sharing. :)

Glad to have made your mood...

Bravo, very well written - faultless. You have embarked on a valiant endeavour with your five minute prompts.
"Each one is a message in a mason jar sent out across the vast sea of the internet." How very true.
Nick

Thanks very much for your kind comments.

Here is Chapter One of Act Two. Upvoted to bring up in the comments, for your usage.

But will he remember? ? ?

Hey, Bruce said you might like to do some Over 20 Club Art? It would be nice....

Your writing is impeccable... I absolutely love your style. Now I have to go through the chapters and read this through and through. I'm so happy that you found the Freewriters!

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