Finish The Story! Week #56
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Welcome, dear writers, to our 56th Edition through the playgrounds of the fantastic! The week's contest point person is @dirge.
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Contest Prompt introduced on June 28th. Posts must be submitted, linked in the comments, by July 3rd. Posts submitted after deadline (noon on the3rd) will be disregarded. Sorry, but I've got a job.
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The Church
The air was sticky and they’d been drinking for hours. It was late into the evening of the going away party for Ron and Jenni. They’d been good friends to Sean when he first arrived, but since then they’d grown distant. In fact, it had been awhile since Sean had hung out with anyone. He’d arrived to a room full of people he didn’t know, already well on their way to getting drunk.
“It’s so great to see you,” Jenni said, offering a hug. “Sean, oh man!”
Ron offered a handshake. “Hey man, good to see you one last time.”
“Thanks for the invite,” Sean replied. “And sorry to see you going.”
The room erupted with laughter. A man had slipped and fell on his ass and he was rolling on the ground hollering away. “I’m goanna grab a cigarette,” Sean said.
“Oh wait!” Jenni grabbed his arm. “Let me introduce you to everyone!” She proceeded to bring him through the rooms of the townhome they rented for the night’s going away party. There was a Jack and a Royal and a Jeremy and a Kim and a Karen and more and Sean soon forgot all those names anyway. He finally go outside for a cigarette, his heart racing and his anxiety peaked.
“Fucking…” he mumbled to himself. “Too many fucking people in that space.”
“I know, right?”
The voice startled him. He peaked over and saw a girl sitting with pink dyed hair. “Can
I get one of those?”
“You know Jen and Ron?” Sean asked, offering her a cigarette.
“Sure,” the girl replied. “We met a few times at church.”
“Church?” Sean asked. “I’m incredulous. I didn’t know they were Christians.”
“Oh, it’s not that kind of church.” The girl took a drag on her cigarette and the presumed air of mystery she was attempting to paint annoyed him.
“Okay,” Sean said. “Well, then, what kind of church is it?”
The door to the porch opened and the music blared from inside. Ron came outside with a group of other party goers, all drunk and cheering.
“I’m telling you,” one of the guys was saying. “That girl’s totally into me. I’m going to go for it.”
“Do it!” Ron said. “We all believe in you man. Believe in yourself!” Then, turning to Sean. “We’re going for a swim!” Ron announced. He shouted it again, and the group cheered.
Sean glanced over to the girl, whose name he still didn’t know. She was smiling.
They trekked down the dirt road from the pension then through a dirt path. The ground was rocky, volcanic in some spots in that way typical to Jeju. Drunk, most of them stumbled. They passed by a fish farm, the ponds of which were covered in nets. Then a water treatment plant with rumbling generators inside its deep warehouse.
Then they reached a secret, secluded beach. The pink haired girl stripped down, an obsidian necklace dangling from her neck, glowing in the moonlight. She descended into the water.
“It warm and wonderful!” she said. “Come on.”
The group stripped down, and Sean saw many were wearing the same pendant. He began to strip as well, as the idea of warm ocean waters in such a hot night was intoxicating. He went into the water, swimming till it was deep enough to fully submerge.
When he came back up, he heard screaming.
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Hmmm think I am going for sarez in the end
My vote goes to @gwilberiol
And mine's for @sidequest. 😝
@sarez gets my vote this week. As a person who deals with PTSD and some major anger issue, I know what it is like to fly off the handle from the tiny of things going wrong. This was way more than I have gone through but still brought up my own faults. 8-)
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Here we are:
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@sidequest/one-last-time
Hi guys, after a while, I am again with you. This is my end for this story. It is a bit short, but I hope you like it. https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@stormlight24/scream-finish-the-story-week-56
Hey @stormlight24! Nice to see you with us again 😁 Im sure we will and no problem if it's short.. Quantity is not synonim of quality. Cheers!
My Entry: https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@sarez/break-my-entry-for-finishthestory
First blood for @sarez!
My entry:
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@jadams2k18/lives-finish-the-story-contest-week-56
Cheers!
As it happens, I wrote a thing for this edition too.
anxiety is a bitch
By the skin of my teeth,
I'm dropping a story,
Hopefully horrific,
but not too gory ;-)
https://steemit.com/fiction/@raj808/the-church-of-the-coral-kingdom-finish-the-story-week-56
I'm not scared of gore :P
Ha ha, you're in for a treat then 😉
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Love the rhyming.
Sometimes I can't help myself with the poetry Tristan 😉
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This is my end for this story
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@maparari/pink-haired-girl-finish-the-story-contest-week-56
beware the pink haired girl. do not make eye contact
here is my entry....hope you could just remember my name and i will reply there too
https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@angelro/the-dwarf-s-world