The Church of the Coral Kingdom - Finish The Story Week 56

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Here is Raj, who breaks into the contest with authority and with his unique and unmistakable style. The reader is guided through a kaleidoscope of perceptions, colors, and vivid suggestions. I'd expect nothing less and I am very pleased to see you again here, Master Rowan!

Hi mate. Glad you enjoyed the sexy crazy massacre of the shark cult - ermmmmm church I mean - of Jeju island :)

I am very pleased to see you again here

Thanks m8. I was completely drawn in by @dirge beginning. Also, the 'tell a story to me' prompt has piqued my interest and I might well have a crack at it as my scuba knowledge would make it easy to inject a high level of realism to that setting.

The ultimate combination 😂

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Wow! Very seductively and powerfully written! Will they pick a "winner," or is it more of a baton - relay style - collaboration?

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Ha ha, well cindy, this is the only romance I've ever written on steem.... and it ended up in dismemberment and transcendental transformation... that's the power of the @bananafish ;-)

Man/woman to shark. The church of the coral kingdom! Sex and death is always a winning combination 😄

P.s. yeah, they do pick a winner in the finish the story contest 🙂

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I had a feeling the brown stuff was about to hit the fan in the final sentence of the prompt but then you turned it in to an orgy massacre haha! I was pulled in just like those who went to church for the last time.

Great writing mate! Hope you get the prize here 🙂

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I had a feeling the brown stuff was about to hit the fan in the final sentence of the prompt but then you turned it in to an orgy massacre haha!

Ha ha, yes it was definitely a brown trouser situation. I'm glad you enjoyed the sexy crazy massacre of the shark cult - ermmmmm church I mean - of Jeju island m8 :)

Haha it certainly was like nothing I've ever read before man, great stuff 😀

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I'm in the library and I had to cover my tent after reading this piece. lol

Ha ha. Yes, that's definitely against the library guidelines. Shhhhh, quiet please.... and no tents in the ancient history section please 😂

@raj808 - awesome story, loved the detail and the immersion into the cult....urrrr church. I hear you might be joining us @steemfiction for the next book! Great!!

Ha ha the shark cult will devour you..... unless you can swim... fast ;-)

I would be honored to write a story for @steemfiction :)

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