Micro-fiction writing contest (was #fiftywords) - Last week's winner and new prompt

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Welcome to the Micro-fiction Contest! As everyone probably knows by now, we've switched things up as follows:

  • This is now a weekly micro-fiction writing contest with a reward of 2 SBD.
  • The word limit is now 250 words. (Anything 250 words or under is fine.)
  • We are collaborating with the #freewrite community and @FreeWriteHouse! @mariannewest uses the weekly micro-fiction contest prompt as one of her prompts, and writers are encouraged to polish their short piece and resubmit here.
Be sure to check out the weekly prompt, and include that word in your story. For this week the prompt is "train." In the rest of this post you will find:
  • An intro to the micro-fiction contest.
  • Last week's winner.
  • The contest rules.
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About the micro-fiction contest

Micro-fiction short stories are fun to write, and they stretch your skills. The challenge is to write a complete story within a tight word limit. If you're just trying it out for the first time, welcome! Here are a few FAQs:
  • Why participate? Because it's an interesting challenge, and a really great way to hone your fiction writing and editing skills. Oh, and it gives you something to post weekly.
  • What makes a great micro-fiction story? As we all know, critique of the arts is subjective. That said, I have a few metrics for choosing the best entry:
    • Is the story well-written and edited? (A compelling story line, and no spelling or punctuation errors.)
    • Does it have the elements of a story? For example, a true story must have a conflict of some kind. It could be a conflict between people, an inner conflict or deep desire of a character, or a big challenge such as an oncoming storm. And there must be a resolution to the conflict. For example, the character might walk away from the conflict or breathe a sigh of relief. (Need an example? My latest one is here.)
    • Is the story satisfying to read? Remember you are writing for readers. The story must have interesting character(s) and story elements.
  • What else do I need to know?
    • See the rules below. There are just a few of them, especially around use of images, and there are some great image resources for you.
    • Note also that the deadline isn't as firm as a lot of contests. It's always on a Saturday, but as long as your entry comes in before the next prompt post comes out (usually late Sunday or early Monday), it's fine.

Writing resources

If you are not sure how to write a compelling story, see my weekly mini writing workshop (tagged #writingworkshop). The latest post is here, and it includes links to all of the posts. You can also have someone else read your story and help with your storyline, grammar and punctuation. There are multiple Steem writing communities to help you:

Last week's winning entry

Thank you to everyone who participated in last week's contest: @felixgarciap, @sayee, @ahmadmanga, @botefarm, @adncabrera, @joeylim. I really enjoyed all the entries, based on the "space" prompt! For the winning entry of the week, I've chosen Maiden Voyage to Space, by @joeylim. Now and then, one of these micro-fiction pieces completely devastates me. This was one of those times. This one brought me to tears.

I've placed the complete story here:

With smug satisfaction, Lukas re-read his note, full of dark pencil smudges on the wide-lined notebook paper.

“Dear Mummi,

Do not wurri for mi. I am going to space. I will bi back. Then they will bi scared of mi. They will not steal my toi. They will not hit mi. They will not call mi dumb. Then they will si.”

A gust of wind scattered the neat pile of eraser dust across the table and he looked up, through the open windows. Lukas clapped his hands with glee, running and tripping as he hastily wore his red cape.

Five minutes later, he was on the ledge. Lukas squinted in the sun’s fierce glare; he could not quite see the rooftop of the adjacent apartment buildings. He could only hear the cacophony of cars honking and tires screeching and people yelling. This made him wonder for a split second, will there be silence in outer space?

It was time to find out.

Arms outstretched like Superman, Lukas flew.

Nice work, @joeylim! Your reward is on the way. Thank you again to all participants. Your work is always a joy to read!

New micro-fiction short story prompt and rules

The new prompt for this coming week is "train." I look forward to seeing what you come up with! The deadline is Saturday, February 2nd, with a grace period until the new contest post is up.

Contest rules

  1. Write a micro-fiction story in 250 words or less and post it to your blog, then provide a link to the story in the comments. Please do not post your story in the comments!
  2. Use only artwork that you have the right to use, and attribute it properly. See "Use of images" below.
  3. Use the #microfiction tag. If you would like to write your story to exactly 50 words or 100 words, feel free to use the #fiftywords or #100words tag, as appropriate. And finally, #flashfiction is a great tag as well.

You can use any posting tool, e.g. Steemit, Busy, Partiko, or Steampeak. Just please publish it on its own, not combined with any other contest.

Note that you are not required to upvote or resteem this post, nor are you required to support other participants. Entries will be judged on merit only. But active community participation and support of your fellow writers is, of course, highly encouraged.

Use of images

You are welcome to illustrate your story with an image, as long as you have the right to use it. One of the following must be true:

  1. The image is public domain, or under creative commons licensing. See the resource links below.
  2. It is your own image.
  3. If it is not one of the above, you must have actual permission.

Be sure to properly attribute the image’s source or mention that the image is yours.

Here are some creative commons and public domain image resources:

Good luck micro-fiction writers!

Invitation to current and past participants


If you are active on Steem and have participated in past #fiftywords and #microfiction challenges. I invite you to jump in and be a part of this weekly micro-fiction contest. If you prefer not to be tagged in my weekly post, please let me know!

@ablaze, @ahmadmanga, @anixio, @barski, @bimjer, @blueeyes8960, @blueteddy, @bex-dk, @bimjer, @botefarm, @caleblailmusik, @calluna, @cheekah, @cizzo, @creatr, @deemarshall, @deirdyweirdy, @diebitch, @direge, @ducksaplenty, @eaglespirit, @elbrujo, @emergehealthier, @enjar, @felixgarciap, @gaby-crb, @galatichunter @gmatthe2, @goastrighter, @hlezama, @imaluv54, @iamjadeline, @intothewild, @jadams2k18, @jasminearch, @joeylim, @jonknight, @kaelci, @letalis-laetitia, @manoldonchev, @marie-jay, @marlyncabrera, @marvyinnovation, @michaias, @missladybug, @negativer, @niallon11, @oscarina, @poetrybyjeremy, @purpledaisy57, @preparedwombat, @pyemoney, @pyrowngs, @raj808, @razel, @rokhani, @roxy-cat, @shanedustin, @theironfelix, @thinknzombie, @tristancarax, @tygertyger, @vdux, @wakeupkitty, @wales, @wems, @wordymouth

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Wow! the first place is quite a story!!! Well chosen!

Yes, he really knocked it out of the park!

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Thank you for the short story reminder.

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You’re welcome. I hope you will participate again. 😁

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Hello, thank you for this contest, here's my entry: The blonde on the train

And congratulations to @joeylim for winning the previous contest, it was a very sad story.

Great! Thanks for joining the contest!

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Hi @darthgexe, I'm providing the correct link here, as I discovered the one above is not working. https://steemit.com/microfiction/@darthgexe/the-blonde-on-the-train-micro-fiction-writing-contest.

@jayna ((': honoured much, thank you!! ❤️

As an aside, thanks also to all your wonderful people who offered your congrats. It really makes me want to improve and continue writing. The knowledge that your story reached straight into someone else's heart and kindled something there is, to me, the most precious treasure of a writer.

Above anything else.

Yes, that is a wonderful reward, isn't it? Your story touched everyone who read it very deeply. Please keep writing.

Thank you for your early entry, @wakeupkitty!

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Hi @wakeupkitty. I'm catching up on reading all the story entries. Did you mean to add a link to a fiction piece based on the writing prompt? This link goes to a "people photography" post. (But thank you for the nomination!)

Hi, @Jayna.

@joeylim story is, as you put it, "devastating"; it is really touching. It made me remember what I felt the first time I read Naipaul's "The Maternal Instinct"; I felt a punch in the stomach when I read the famous line, “It good. It better that way,” which was Laura’s answer to the news: her oldest child, Lorna, had drowned with her baby. No doubt, it was terrible, but to Laura, it was better than Lorna’s going through a life of suffering because of the same mistakes she had made. Why @joeylim makes me remember this? Well, it is the ingenuousness conveyed in the oral text fragment: as a reader, you are face to face with the character in his entire candor. It is just so true.

Great contest. Perhaps my head can produce something for this round XD

Yes, it is really an art to put the reader into the mind of the character. I have not read the story you mentioned. It sounds terribly sad.

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oh my Joeylim! devastating for sure. I'm always in awe of your work, and this one is no exception.

It really is a very powerful piece.

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Congratulations to @joeylim. I really liked your story. Very touching and really leaves a tremor in the soul.
Deserved prize!
It's a beautiful contest, @jayna. I'm excited!

A “tremor in the soul” — that’s beautiful.

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