RE: "Ethereal" - Writing Impact Challenge

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RE: "Ethereal" - Writing Impact Challenge

jazzybells (56)in #writingimpact • 7 years ago (edited)

:P those were the prompt words as part of the challenge for #writingimpact. This link

7 years ago in #writingimpact by jazzybells (56)

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trumanity (60) 7 years ago

You did a fine job building all those words in without allowing the poem to be forced in any way. It all holds together very positively. The sea shore can be a place of quiet tranquility or a place that reminds one of the forces of nature that are so immense, and which place us as such a small part of a greater whole.

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jazzybells (56) 7 years ago

Thank you @trumanity! I appreciate it.
🌊☀️ And I couldn't agree more with you!⤵️⤵️

The sea shore can be a place of quiet tranquility or a place that reminds one of the forces of nature that are so immense, and which place us as such a small part of a greater whole.