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RE: "Ethereal" - Writing Impact Challenge
nice one. what are the bold words.. i tried reading those seperately after i read the poem the first time, but they don't make sense.. :P yea, life is good!
nice one. what are the bold words.. i tried reading those seperately after i read the poem the first time, but they don't make sense.. :P yea, life is good!
:P those were the prompt words as part of the challenge for #writingimpact. This link
You did a fine job building all those words in without allowing the poem to be forced in any way. It all holds together very positively. The sea shore can be a place of quiet tranquility or a place that reminds one of the forces of nature that are so immense, and which place us as such a small part of a greater whole.
Thank you @trumanity! I appreciate it.
🌊☀️ And I couldn't agree more with you!⤵️⤵️
ahhhh. sige.