Rhino Rules Contest #2: Animal Stories -- Shawnee and the Beast

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The Beast liked to sit quietly in the shadows of the corner, its smooth coat almost blending in with the white and grey pattern of the cold walls and hard floor. It seemed to have no eyes, but she stared it down anyway. Despite its small size, it had a gaping maw that opened wide with a rattle whenever one of her people brought a foot too near.

They fed it routinely, the foolish humans, especially the female, who was often silly and irresponsible. Not that she wanted the odd things they fed to it--they never smelled of food to her. Even her master, usually wise and responsible, failed to recognize the danger of the strange Beast. The female even named the stupid thing Justa.

Why did they let such a dangerous creature live in their potty room? How could they dare to squat so close to it?

Her job was to protect them. She kept her eye on the Beast whenever her people were near. But it even tricked them into moving it into the back corner, where she couldn't be as effective a guard.

In those moments, the Beast would stand deceptively still, no sign of any movement. Then as their foot drew near, its mouth would snap open, ready to devour them. It loved to bite at fingers and hands, too, quietly opening just wide enough to bite off fingers or even swallow the hand whole.

It was the bane of her existence, the constant danger invading her home. She warned them, day in and day out, but they never listened. They just kept feeding the enemy....

It was the middle of night and Shawnee slept soundly in her preferred spot in her master's chair in the living room. Suddenly alert, she recognized the distinctive clicks and rattles of the cabinet beside the sink opening and closing--a cabinet where Beast food is stored. Couldn't a dog even sleep in peace in this house without someone feeding the Beast?

She raced out, through the food room, down past the door to the car and play area, into the potty room. Luckily her people had the sense to leave the potty room door open for her, even if they sometimes pushed it partly closed. The Beast would hurt no one on her watch.

Running full speed into the room, her feet slid on the slippery floor as she turned to face the Beast, positioning herself between it and her foolish mistress.

Mistress twirled the Beast-food stick in her ears. Odd habits these humans had. Then her human moved towards the Beast. Shawnee darted between the potty spot and the wall, snapping her teeth at the Beast. She's my human! No one hurts my human. She banged it with her nose, then hit it again to be sure it got her message. It retreated slightly, scraping its bottom on the floor in its hurry. You are nothing beast. Get out of here!

"Shawnee, that's enough." Her mistress's voice was commanding, so Shawnee retreated carefully, maintaining constant eye contact with the Beast and clapping her teeth a few more times to show it who's in charge.

"Lie down," Mistress said. Frustrated, Shawnee dropped to the floor, but didn't break eye contact.

Mistress took a step forward, closer to the Beast. Shawnee's muscles tightened, ready to leap in front of her.

Mistress held out a flat palm. "Stay."

Master would be unhappy with her if she ignored Mistress, so Shawnee stayed put, but her muscles quivered in readiness. As Mistress moved between her and the Beast, Shawnee pivoted her head constantly, stretching her neck, as she struggled to maintain eye contact and stare down the Beast. It would know her power, even if it had no eyes.

Mistress reached towards the Beast with her foot. Beast opened its maw wide with an angry bang.

Danger! Danger! Although everything in her ached to end the showdown, she knew it would disappoint Master if she moved. She clapped her teeth and put even more threat into her stare.

Mistress dropped the stick into the Beast's gaping mouth. Its upper jaw clapped shut on the meal, luckily without Mistress's hand having come too close--this time.

Mistress backed away from the Beast. "Shawnee, free."

Shawnee sprang from her spot on the floor, slithering her wiry body between Mistress's legs and the wall. She subdued the evil Beast with copious teeth claps and a few jabs from her nose.

Satisfied she again kept Mistress from harm, Shawnee turned from the Beast. She tilted her head as she looked at Mistress.

Mistress sighed loudly. "Shawnee, it's just a trash can."

Mistress sounded frustrated with Justa. Her body language was unhappy. Perhaps Mistress was finally understanding the threat the Beast posed and thinking of having Master kick it out?

With a final glare at the Beast, Shawnee followed Mistress from the potty room. She waited a moment in the hallway until she heard the door click safely shut.

Stopping at the gate to her humans' nest, she checked that Master slept soundly. Mistress opened the gate and slipped through, but left Shawnee on the outside. She wished she could have a snuggle with Master under his comforter to celebrate her victory.

Finally Shawnee padded back to her master's comfy chair in the living room, which at least smelled like him, and curled up. She'd need her sleep to be ready in the morning for another day of guard duty.


I realize this story does not fully follow the guidelines for the contest, but Shawnee herself believes she is triumphing over all the odds in protecting her family. Also I thought the readers might enjoy a lighter twist among the likely darker tales.

The story is based on the dog in the photos and her real obsessive behavior about the bathroom trash can. She isn't a true rescue dog. She was the result of an accidental litter where, for once, the owners tried to be responsible. What we paid for her approximately covered the vet costs (she came with microchip and fully vaccinated) and their other costs with the litter, when divided out. The owners also had their male neutered to make sure they didn't have further accidents. Her parents were both purebred registered border collies (working sheep dogs) but the mother was not yet old enough for testing on her hips, so the pups couldn't be registered.

Shawnee's behavior with the trash can is a good example of how border collies create their own jobs. It isn't that Shawnee doesn't get mental stimulation--she helps with assigned chores in the house, like laundry, and has learned a number of service dog tasks from Molly and steps in with them. But she's the sensitive and obsessive type and focused on this trash can.

All SBD proceeds from the post itself will be donated to @RhondaK for her rescue. She is getting in mother and pups which she believes to be border collie and heeler crosses. These funds will help her with the vet expenses, so all can be transported to a rescue in Vermont when they are old enough. If you want to help with these pups, please contact her directly (you can find her by clicking the Writers' Block icon and joining the server there).

Please check out the Rhino Rules Contest and support both @carolkean's posts about the contest (which also send funds to @rhondak) and the other entrants!


My thanks to the entire "Night Shift" crew on the Writers' Block, especially @thinknzombie and @tinypaleokitchen. Also special thanks to @carolkean. I'm not quite myself this week with stress prepping for my upcoming trip. I barely found time to write and edit this story and take the photos. Everyone there has gone above and beyond helping me with thinking through my story, editing, and reassuring my overwhelming self-doubts about whether this story was even worth posting. Without them, you wouldn't have gotten to read it.

And an extra thanks to my mother, who also read the draft and found a few things needing fixing!


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Bex - you got title and tags right - GO BEX!!!
You also have a marvelous story told from a dog's POV (which is not easy to do).
Thanks for entering, busy as you've been lately!

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@bex-dk, I love it. Such a whimsical musing, an otherworld take on life in the present moment with a beautiful furry being called "dog". I love how your imagination and creativity flow. Bravo!

Absolutely loved this! Wonderful story.

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How did I first see this now? I'm sorry. You may ALWAYS include anything of mine anywhere your Curate, GMuxx. Can I write you a letter of free access? ;-)

My old dog used to see the central vac as a wyrm that rose from the deep to consume all in its path. We had to buy a new vacuum hose every now and again.

Fantastic post Bex!

Thank you. They have a thing about the vacuum also, especially Shawnee. Usually put them outside or at least in another room when vacuuming.

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