FANTASY STORY CHAIN

Hello Fellow Steemians,

This is a part of a story chain collaboration organised by @sostrin, where he writes part 1 :

https://steemit.com/story/@sostrin/fantasy-story-chain-collaboration-10sbd-reward-and-more

Part 2 has been written by @redsfallin , which can be found here :

https://steemit.com/story/@redsfallin/fantasy-story-chain-collaboration-10sbd-reward-and-more

ME? i am writing part 3 of the story, i suggest you all to read it, because you will love the story and might want to add part 4

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PART 3

Many bullock-carts of Krillians go from the western plains to the eastern plains to trade goods and earn money. They would go in the morning and come back by evening. Similarly carts of aquanians would come to the western plains for trading goods and would return by evening. This was a daily deal. The locals were good in behavior and would let people travel in their carts for free but only when there was some space to sit. Janre managed to find a cart departing towards the eastern plains with some decent space to sit for him and keep his bags. He sat up quickly and the cart-rider started the bullock-cart after making sure his cart was full and he was not going empty. There were quite a few people sitting in the cart with Janre. He was sitting, looking towards his hubble and thinks to himself, how he is going to miss his mother and sister. He started humming a song, suddenly the boy sitting next to him said " Hi, that's my favorite song you are humming. Thanks :) . By the way, i am Shawn. "

Janre : Oh glad, that's my favorite too, i am Janre, nice to meet you.

Shawn : So where are you headed to in eastern plains?

Janre : I am going for the journey of manhood, maybe to my friend's BAL house, who is an aquarian. Where are you going?

Shawn : Oh wow, you turned 14 cycles today? I turned 15 cycles today and came to visit my family which we get to do after completing half journey of manhood and now i am back to my journey to the eastern plains, 1 long cycle still ahead.

Janre : Yes i turned 14 cycles today, amazing brother congratulations on completing half of the journey, so where would you go in the evening? to the same house who trained you halfway through the journey?

Shawn makes his head go down

Shawn : Ummm yeah i would have to, but i wish i could change that.

Janre : Why do you look sad? Everything is ok? This journey is supposed to be thrilling, so much to learn, so much krass to absorb and welcome, why dont you want to back to the same house?

Shawn : I feel i am in love, or maybe its the puberty. The people who are training me have a really beautiful daughter, and whenver i look at her, i could feel Krass level getting low inside me, and i would not be able to focus on my training anymore. She would just look at me and i would lose it all, all my krass and focus. I dont think i will be able to complete my training effectively this way and become a real man.

Janre : Oh, i do not know what to say to you. Ummm have you talked to someone? Maybe you can ask someone wise, what are you supposed to do in such situation?

Shawn : Yes i talked to my father about this today morning only, he told me this is a part of the journey, where you will meet one girl and it will be the test of your mental strength to focus. You have to overcome her. But whenever i even think about her, i lose it all. I donot know how to help myself. So i am worried about how would i complete my manhood training and on the other hand, i want to see her so badly.

Janre : Oh thats is worrying indeed, i have no experience of it so i do not know how to help you but you can join me to Bal's house if that makes you feel better. I can talk to Bal and you can continue your 1 cycle remaining journey there.

Shawn : umm hmmm, that might help me, thankyou so much brother.

Janre : Yeah don't be upset, i am with you, we will figure out something and Bal can also help you.

Shawn : No, please no, you do not say anything about this to Bal, we are taught to not to get attracted to the women of aquanians. Dont you know about the war that happened when a Krillian king got attracted to Aquanian queen. That caused a war and all Krass vanished. Bal might become angry listening this, so please be quiet, i would forget her with time i am sure. And since this is part of the manhood training, i got to overcome her,no other options.

Janre : Ummmm ok, relax, no worries, i would be quite, just don't be upset brother.

Amidst of all the conversation between Janre and Shawn, the bullock-cart reaches from the western plains to the eastern plains
They get off the cart, pick up their bags, and start walking toward Bal house(address of which was given to Janre by his mother Ezbell)

** AT BAL'S HOUSE**
Janre knocks the door with Shawn standing with him
Door opens
Brel (Bal's sister) is standing their with her lovely body covered in thin sheet of night clothes reflecting her beautiful breasts and bellybutton with her long hairs open and flowing in wind
Janre goes speechless at the moment and Shawn looking awkardly at Janre

Suddeny Bal's mother shouts "Who is there?"

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