Fantasy Story chain collaboration 10sbd reward and more #1

in #story7 years ago (edited)

Hi all you wonderful Steemians,

I would like to start off by thanking @sostrin for getting me into this with his wonderful and great storyline and also getting me in on another collaboration contest you can check out here created by @freedomexists.

@sostrin decided to make his own collaboration contest to do and you can find that here

This is the first time I am doing this. So how it is working I think is you make a post and then send the link of the story on the page above where the original story starts.. As I am aware I am the second one to do a part so I started at chapter two of the story.

Thank you and I hope you enjoy again thank you @sostrin!!
I hope I did this to the correct rules of the contest!!


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Chapter 2- Janres Journey Begins

After eating breakfast, Janre raced back to his room. He knew that he has a long journey over the next two cycles. It starts with the the trek to the Aquarian's home.. As he was packing his stuff, he remembered up in the top storage of the house he wanted to grab the rhythm oscillator that he wanted to bring to Bal. His friend from the Hubbles of the Eastern plains. As he went looking through the different boxes, he came across a journal. This journal he had never seen before. Janre opens the cover to the first page and see this written, "To my wonderful Husband may you keep all your thought bubbles safe here, With All My Krass you loving wife Ezbell." Quickly he looked up and around the storage room to make sure he was alone. Through the open stair hole he could hear his mother explaining something to his sister, Jenkel about lore in fire healing for her Rite of passage. That was the test she had to pass to begin her train as her mother before her and hers before that.

Janre looking back at the book closes it and puts it under is arm to hold as he returns to looking for the rhythm oscillator for Bal, and rushes back to his room. Now back in his room with the door closed. Janre puts the oscillator into one of the travel packs. He sits on his bed, looking at his fathers book. He wonders should he look at it... They never really explained what happen eight cycles ago in his fathers accident. Janre opens to the second page of the book. It reads as follows.

If you are reading this son, then you have became a man and start your journey.

Quickly, he looks at his door, then back to the book!

This book is going to explain the truth of the Krass.
What it truly is. They connect!

For some reason, he thought of Bals sister Brel, and how much he remembered how Bal would speak of her and her abilities. He slaps the book close. Why did he just think this, what was going on? Why did he feel this way? He pushes the book into one of his zipper pouches, zips it up and heads for his door. He could not think of such things right now, it was a three day hike to the Aquarian City. He comes into the living area to find his mother and sister waiting, listening to the frequency channeler about the news of the Great send off and receiving. They both turn to him to hug and say their good byes. His mother, Ezbell said after hugging him, "always stay open to the Krass in your heart let it lead you in your service of the people you will meet, I love you my son go now and become the man as you are destine to be." His sister with her blonde hair gives him a big hug. and states, "I know you will learn all you can bro, and you will show those Aquarians what we Krillians are made of.(She was one of the ones I spoke of that are not big on the Aquarians) I respect her most has she has been someone I look up to for here abilities early on with Krass. They finish their goodbyes.. Jankre picks up his bags and starts off on his journey into Man hood..

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Yo man, this is way cool. Like I'm really interested in how this will go about...

Your a great writer I know it, why not take a crack at it...!!!???

Oh what a compliment! Maybe I will try may hand at it after all..

As i said in @sostrin 's post, love to see you both in action.

And when i'll feel is time for me to join, maybe i will enter. Being in english makes it harder for me to put out my thoughts quickly when they come ;-)

Cheers to both of you and to others who participated.

Thanks @ilvstranger, Don't let the english hold you back just what you don't know look up, it might take longer but it will be worth it for sure.

Lol... i did again some long posts immersed into the subject i read on that specific posts... The writers are surprised of my long talk there... and only to the point ;-)

I don't think i have the gift to write from the start all the things i see and like to share... i need a starting point.

But with fantasy subjects... english barrier could be a problem. Because in my mind things come and go... quickly. There are so many at some point and need to write them right at that moment otherwise they are long gone till i found the translations.

Also, meaning is a problem. I can't find way in english to express terms in my language.

I maybe have a chance with google translate at some point... will maybe write in my language then try to laugh at google translate... and who knows, hahaa

#cof

That would definitely be a start for sure, I bet you have great imagination

lol... that's what she said

;-)

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