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RE: Scorum: WHERE EVERYONE IS A SPORTS PUNDIT. PART 1.
Thanks for your review @lordneroo. I will talk about the platform extensively in subsequent postings.
That being said, I would love to know areas where my grammar was poor. Especially when your review is that it is below average.
Hello!
I will provide a few examples for you:
This sentence should read: ''It is no surprise at all because, football is the most common sport in the world."
To be honest, I don't really understand what you meant to say there.
This sentence should read: ''You only need your email address and a peculiar username and that's it."
Again, this would be a much better sentence: ''You don't need advanced technical knowledge in order to navigate through the platform.''
No need to use a comma after the verb; there is no subordinate clause, appositive, or other special situation calling for a comma. This would be much better: "Sometimes we blame the players, sometimes the coach."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Yes I did. Thanks. But those few omissions couldn't have hurt reading experience though.
Anyways no qualms.
Those are just a few examples.