RE: Scorum: WHERE EVERYONE IS A SPORTS PUNDIT. PART 1.
Hello!
I will provide a few examples for you:
It is no surprise at all because, football is the commonest sports in the world.
This sentence should read: ''It is no surprise at all because, football is the most common sport in the world."
So basically, the platform is quite similar to steemit, but, with different a constrained kind of content.
To be honest, I don't really understand what you meant to say there.
You only require your email address and a peculiar username and that's it.
This sentence should read: ''You only need your email address and a peculiar username and that's it."
You don't require high-end technical know-how to navigate through the platform.
Again, this would be a much better sentence: ''You don't need advanced technical knowledge in order to navigate through the platform.''
Sometimes we blame, the players, sometimes, the coach.
No need to use a comma after the verb; there is no subordinate clause, appositive, or other special situation calling for a comma. This would be much better: "Sometimes we blame the players, sometimes the coach."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Yes I did. Thanks. But those few omissions couldn't have hurt reading experience though.
Anyways no qualms.
Those are just a few examples.