Tell a Story to Me – Contest #11 – The Scariest Story Ever Told . . . @calluna

in #tellastorytome6 years ago (edited)

Scary Story.jpgImage Credit Pixabay.com
Prompt: The Scariest Story Ever Told. . .

From @calluna’s writing contest. For more information please see the link:
https://steemit.com/tellastorytome/@calluna/tell-a-story-to-me-and-win-5-sbd-writing-contest-11-the-scariest-story-ever-told-and-winners-of-10

My Entry:

“Cut!” Yelled the Director.

The actors in the sex murder scene relaxed. The woman lay on the bed in a pool of fake blood, the man with a knife raised in his hand, both half naked.

All around them the heat of the lights on the set.

“What do you want to do for lunch?” Asked the Production Assistant.

“I don’t know. We could get some burgers downtown?” Answered the Cameraman.

333

Alone in a midnight horror film theater watching B movies with guts and gore, Anthony laughed to himself. People knew of him because he starred in the same kind of movies.

Only the last movie haunted him a little.

He’d never had sex and murdered a woman at the same time, the epitome of the genre, sex and violence.

He looked at the text message sent from his co-star in that scene: “<3 <3 <3 much luv to ya. Going to the Oscars!!!”

How had Cleopatra got above him?

He had been the star of so many horror movies, and she had been a screamer in some of them, and then she does one romantic comedy and she’s going to the Oscars with her new leading man; that man in her new movie a complete buffoon. Just a stand up comic with a camera turned on him.

Anthony had gone to Juilliard, he studied the craft, and he had the talent. He just needed the right role in the right movie.

333

It started with Anthony’s grandfather’s Grandfather Clock. He had inherited it before the Oscars and gave it a prestigious position in his living room.

People commented on it over wine and cheese at his Oscar party, and when Cleopatra’s interview on the Red Carpet aired, the mysterious clock chimed unannounced.

The vibration from the sound struck a chord in his soul, and he thought of the girl in the well with her hair brushed over her face; the jarred movements of her walking on hands out of the television set.

Only Cleopatra still dominated the Red Carpet. The people in his home watched her speak with smiling faces all happy that someone they knew from movie sets had made it to the big time.

They all gathered to watch Cleopatra star in this moment with a collective awe. Only a fly landed on Anthony’s forehead. He waved it away with annoyance wondering when his time would arrive.

333

About a month later, in the middle of the night, the Grandfather Clock chimed again. It awoke Anthony like an alarm clock.

He slept on the second floor in a corner bedroom. Even when the clock struck on the hour it had never been loud enough to awake him from his slumber.

His bedside clock said 2:34 am. Shaken, he pulled the covers over his head, and did his best to fall back to sleep.

As he finally relaxed in the warmth of his bed to drift away into the feathered pillow of sleep, the scratching started.

The sound of finger nails scraping along the wood from the closed bedroom door.

When he’d gone to sleep, he had locked all the exterior doors, and set the security alarm. Anthony knew himself to be the only person in the house.

Alone, and yet the distinct screech of nails along the bedroom door. He thought again of the Japanese spook known to movie goers as the girl from the well.

The scratching stopped.

Goose bumps hardened his nipples. Should he get up to investigate? Or explain it to himself as his imagination? With no more indications of a presence he preferred the latter and fell asleep.

He felt body weight pressing down on his mattress. When he opened his eyes he could see that the bedroom door had opened. Startled he shot up in bed only to discover the girl from the well crawling toward him. Her black wet hair hiding her face and Anthony screamed!

If you read this story you might perish soon in an unpleasant manner.

Thank you,
Cyrus Emerson

Red Roses the audiobook for your consideration at the Voice Arts Awards (NYC), and the Grammys (LA).
https://www.audible.com/pd/Fiction/Red-Roses-Audiobook/B07F2LWHPN

Red Roses narrated by Kira Omans
www.kiraomans.com
Red Roses Dress.jpg

Red Roses music by Rike Luxx
www.rikeluxxbeats.com

Red Roses sound by Pond5
www.pond5.com

Also, available from The Author:

Fear and Loathing in the State of Jefferson - ebook
https://read.amazon.com/kp/embed?asin=B079R5KLPN&preview=newtab&linkCode=kpe&ref_=cm_sw_r_kb_dp_GsURAbAVDYNEM

Lost Angel – Introduction with Ray Manzarek of The Doors
https://www.downpour.com/lost-angel?sp=249812

Sort:  

The girl in the well is always scary stuff. Glad you asked her spirit for permission before writing this story. And 666 words! Funny guy.

Choosing actors for the protagonists works really well, and you open with some nice strong scene setting, vivid imagery that contrasts well with the subsequent dinner party. This is a technique I often appreciate, the hard hit which shifts expectations (in this case the murder porn) to highlight subtleties of the next setting. The co-stars award, the clock ticking, the momentary girl climbing of the of tv, you feign a few classic tropes, before carrying one further, and wrapping it up with a nice tension build to jump scare.

The winners of round 11 have been announced and round 12 is out - hope you will be honouring me with another great entry!

Congratulations! This post has been upvoted from the communal account, @minnowsupport, by cyemela from the Minnow Support Project. It's a witness project run by aggroed, ausbitbank, teamsteem, someguy123, neoxian, followbtcnews, and netuoso. The goal is to help Steemit grow by supporting Minnows. Please find us at the Peace, Abundance, and Liberty Network (PALnet) Discord Channel. It's a completely public and open space to all members of the Steemit community who voluntarily choose to be there.

If you would like to delegate to the Minnow Support Project you can do so by clicking on the following links: 50SP, 100SP, 250SP, 500SP, 1000SP, 5000SP.
Be sure to leave at least 50SP undelegated on your account.

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.15
TRX 0.12
JST 0.026
BTC 56125.76
ETH 2526.68
USDT 1.00
SBD 2.27