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RE: Tell a Story to Me – Contest #11 – The Scariest Story Ever Told . . . @calluna
Choosing actors for the protagonists works really well, and you open with some nice strong scene setting, vivid imagery that contrasts well with the subsequent dinner party. This is a technique I often appreciate, the hard hit which shifts expectations (in this case the murder porn) to highlight subtleties of the next setting. The co-stars award, the clock ticking, the momentary girl climbing of the of tv, you feign a few classic tropes, before carrying one further, and wrapping it up with a nice tension build to jump scare.
The winners of round 11 have been announced and round 12 is out - hope you will be honouring me with another great entry!
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