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RE: Tell a Story to Me – Contest #11 – The Scariest Story Ever Told . . . @calluna

in #tellastorytome6 years ago

Choosing actors for the protagonists works really well, and you open with some nice strong scene setting, vivid imagery that contrasts well with the subsequent dinner party. This is a technique I often appreciate, the hard hit which shifts expectations (in this case the murder porn) to highlight subtleties of the next setting. The co-stars award, the clock ticking, the momentary girl climbing of the of tv, you feign a few classic tropes, before carrying one further, and wrapping it up with a nice tension build to jump scare.

The winners of round 11 have been announced and round 12 is out - hope you will be honouring me with another great entry!

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