Falling Stars Rising 21

in #story7 years ago (edited)

Nikki woke up to the sound of rain gently drumming on her window. The blue glow of the city lights filtered through the curtains and illuminated the muscular body of the man sleeping beside her. What was his name? Ryan? Ron?

Aleister… a voice inside her head whispered.

She took a deep breath and slowly exhaled, trying her best to calm her suddenly alarmed heart. Turning on her side, she stared at the shadows of the rain trickling down the window glass. She wondered where he was- the freeman. What was he doing? Asleep perhaps. With whom? She imagined him with that witch in his arms and the thought of it sank like a dagger in her breast.

Oh stop it!

She sat up on the edge of the bed and rubbed her eyes. In the dim light, she searched for her nightgown.

“What are you doing?” the man said in a raspy voice.

“Nothing. I just can’t sleep.”

“Take some SleepX,” he said groggily.

“I’ll brew some tea.”

The man didn’t answer and soon began to snore.

Closing the door behind her, she walked across the warm wooden floor towards the kitchen, where she began to prepare herself a cup of tea. Then thinking better of it, she took an ornate bottle from a cabinet instead and poured its pale green liquid into a short narrow glass. The crystal shimmered as it filtered the light like a multifaceted prism. From a drawer, she took out a flat spoon and lay it across the rim of the glass. On top of the spoon, she placed a blue sugar cube, then slowly and deliberately, she poured a dash of water until the cube had fully dissolved, leaving only wet pools of radiance clinging to the spoon.

She stood by the balcony door and watched the rain sweep across the city- illuminated like a ghostly ring, molded to the architectural curvature of Jezebel city, and the traffic lights receding…

When she slid open the door, the cool breeze blew through her copper hair. Beneath her feet, the balcony floor was cool. She made a mental note: add a heating pad to the balcony floor.

Although she was sheltered from the rain, she could feel the mist on her skin. It was like a touch. She closed her eyes. Yes. Like a lover's touch.

Her lips moved of their own accord. “Aleister,” they whispered.

She gasped and raising her glass, she downed the emerald liquid.

What was she thinking?

Emerald thoughts. The city and the rain were one. Lights swirling in the atmosphere. The cool breeze cocooned her in its undulating waves. Inhaling deeply the crisp clean air. The biosphere spun around her. She felt light-headed, as if falling down a micro-gravity well of cognition. It was her jewel. Jezebel city. But she didn't want any jewels, she wanted...

Aleister!

She rushed back inside and taking off her gown, she slipped into bed. Her hands searched for him under the covers but her consort simply stirred and turned away. She turned and braced herself, swollen with desire, reaching beneath her diaphanous gown, in vain trying to quench an alien thirst until she murmured a single name...

Aleister!


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Hey @litguru, nice short story/chapter.
Hopefully I am not dreaming of Aleister tonight :D Otherwise, I will wake up sweating! Is writing your hobby?

Heh! Take a cold shower if you do wake up in the middle of the night thinking of Aleister. Yes, writing fiction is my hobby, so I'm just experimenting with Steemit right now. Thanks for reading!

Congratulations on your curie vote. You deserve it. I went back and read the previous 20 posts. I am surprised in these 3 months you've been posting on "Falling Stars" many posts did not get a single vote. This one surely compensates for that neglet. That's the thing about Steemit. Quality can easily pass unnoticed.

I find it very interesting this story you're developing. I wonder if you have finished it already or are still working on it as you post.

This imagined world where men, free men, are part of ancient history and women somehow rule, keeps going back and forth revisiting mythical and biblical stories and premises about what commercially we may call the battle of the sexes, the eternal struggle for the satisfaction of innate urges and the negotiation of social spaces and power.
This particular section of the story is quite elegant and sensual. The description of emotions, textures and sensations provide quite a colorful atmostphere, a prelude for more tensions.
Wish you luck in the culmination of this story. There are still many questions waiting to be answered.

Thank you for this insightful comment. You're a keen observer, and I'm happy that the ideas that I'm exploring kind of make sense. =) I have a rough idea of the overall story, but I'm refining it as I go. So this is version 1.0. I'm fairly new to Steemit and haven't developed a presence yet, but with comments like yours and others in this community, I'm now more motivated to forge ahead. Cheers!

Great! Happy to help. I think that your genre and style have a big audience here. It will be a matter of establisjing the connections via comments, contests, discord, etc.

Thats a nice short fiction I must say, and there are parts. When are you planning to end the mystery for readers? write a book maybe?

Congrats on your curie vote :)

Thank you! I'm playing around with this story to experiment with language and structure, so we'll see how it goes. Thank you for dropping by!

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