Congratulations on your curie vote. You deserve it. I went back and read the previous 20 posts. I am surprised in these 3 months you've been posting on "Falling Stars" many posts did not get a single vote. This one surely compensates for that neglet. That's the thing about Steemit. Quality can easily pass unnoticed.

I find it very interesting this story you're developing. I wonder if you have finished it already or are still working on it as you post.

This imagined world where men, free men, are part of ancient history and women somehow rule, keeps going back and forth revisiting mythical and biblical stories and premises about what commercially we may call the battle of the sexes, the eternal struggle for the satisfaction of innate urges and the negotiation of social spaces and power.
This particular section of the story is quite elegant and sensual. The description of emotions, textures and sensations provide quite a colorful atmostphere, a prelude for more tensions.
Wish you luck in the culmination of this story. There are still many questions waiting to be answered.