John Henry 2047 - An Original Short Story

in #story6 years ago (edited)

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The steering wheel felt colder than usual. Or was he warmer? Either way, John Henry took a deep breath, tried to calm his nerves, and allowed his awareness to slip way back into his head. The view through the windshield faded, as his story appeared. All at once and from every angle he saw his life, all the way up until this unavoidable moment…


As far back as he could remember, John Henry wanted to be a driver. From a toddler escaping the house more than once to chase a passing unmanned, to an eight-year-old automotive genius with an obsession, he always loved cars. All he wanted to do was drive.

Through his teenage years, John Henry watched as the number of drivers dwindled. He knew in the early 2020’s they had begun experimenting with self-driving cars on the roads; they taught him all about that in school. At first the drivers had held their own, but a few years later the machines were just doing it better. No one could argue with proveably safer transportation, and that was that.

Car companies started making driverless models, which had become commonly known as “unmanneds”. When John Henry was eighteen, he was still determined to pass the driving test. He knew that 98% of the people who attempted the rigorous exam failed, and each candidate was only given one chance for life. He took out a loan to pay the application fee as soon as he was eligible. Years of tinkering with his own antique motors and driving around in the fields on his family’s farm had helped ensure his readiness.

Throughout his twenties, John Henry ruled the roads. As one of only a couple hundred official drivers in the city, he felt like a king. He had to use the standard issue auto instead of his old Ford, but it was all the same to him. Johnny was driving, and he was good at it. Perfect record, consistent early arrival times, exquisite maintenance skills; he really was the best. John Henry drove the most important people and the most important things to the most important places.

John Henry was thirty when it started. An edgy legislator from New Washington started gunning for drivers. She claimed that even the few remaining human drivers on the roads constituted a threat to our national security. A lot of noisy pedestrians rallied around her and a bill got squeezed through into National law. So after more than ten years of impeccable driving with a perfect record, John Henry was forced to give up his car. He was one of the very last.

John settled down with his new wife on his old family farm, having finally come to terms with the fact that he would never drive again. There were no more people driving cars, and he just had to accept that. Everyone trusted machines more than themselves when it came to the most precious cargo. It was going to be a quiet, stationary life for Johnny.

But one day a strange man in a helicopter came to visit. It scared the animals like no tomorrow. John and his wife came out to the front porch to be greeted by a fancily-dressed businessman and his entourage. Once the businessman agreed to turn off his helicopter, they all went inside for a cup of coffee. The man’s name was Xander Ford, apparently a billionaire from automotive manufacturing inheritance.

Mr. Ford explained that although the bill was passed and human drivers were no more, there was still a great resistance among the people. Like John, many simply loved to drive. They cherished the freedom and control, the joy and exhilaration that came with driving a vehicle. Ford and his team of lawyers would see to it that John and his fellow drivers would be given a fair chance. There would be a race.

John Henry had been selected to represent humanity in single competition, if he chose to accept. Victory would mean that humans (if properly qualified) could continue to drive. Defeat would mean giving complete control to machines. Johnny agreed to the competition, because like so many other times in his life, he just wanted to drive.

His opponent would be the greatest unmanned vehicle the world had ever seen. There were no restrictions to the technology that developed this unmanned. Xander Ford explained that it could maneuver and make decisions as well as any human, but it could also predict the future with 98% accuracy. It would be prepared for anything. It would not tire, it would not doubt, it would not fear.

It took a year for the event to come together, though not for lack of planning. John Henry had been training ten hours a day in a Ford warehouse for months. The “race” had become the biggest media circus Johnny had ever seen. Ten square miles of downtown New Washington were completely evacuated, as countless silent cameras watched from the skies and streets. As he climbed into the driver’s seat of the custom-built Ford Humanned-1, the whole world was watching.


John Henry’s life had flashed before his eyes, leaving him where he was right here and now. His life was not over. He was here to win, to beat this god-damned machine against all probability, just as humans always have and always will. The time was now; his entire life had led him to this. He tightly gripped the wheel as a green light filled the air and engines roared. The race had begun.

The End.




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I like the play on the old John Henry mythology, as well as your use of narrative to weave between past and present in the story.

I was kinda relieved to see The End because John Henry drops dead after all his hammering, and I don't want to see "Johnny" Henry win the race, only to drop dead... you leave it up to the reader this way. I say Johnny wins - and lives long enough to enjoy many years of driving.
Driverless cars! I'm still in disbelief.
I grew up on a farm. Before computerized anything. Men and motors. Stick shifts, V-8 engines, wheelies, pedal to the metal, rubber burning on pavement, drag racing on the way to school in the morning, Big Dumb Trucks, cruising Main Street as a weekend activity - save driverless cars for big cities, or China, but America is all about the road, Get your kicks on Route 66, The Feel of the Wheel, the independence and freedom, the wide open spaces to travel. You've hit a sore spot, Chris, and you could reach millions with this one.

I really appreciate your response. :D

I agree about the ending. No need to kill my beloved character at the end; that would be heartbreaking, like the original. I wanted to leave some hope. I think humans will always win.

Another sad thing about the original story. John Henry was competing as part of a bet. If he won, his boss won the Steam engine as a prize. John hammered for himself because he was the best, but he was still being taken advantage of until his death. It was much sadder to read as a grownup.

Thanks, @dirge!

I was inspired by the story of John Henry when I was little. I feel like there's a real problem today with people not giving themselves enough credit. In the time of the tall tale, it was machines and hydraulic presses replacing people's usefulness. Now there's a machine version of pretty much everything that humans have ever been good at. Machines are surgeons, teachers, drivers, even writers and poets.

It's time for humans to step up and secure our place in the future! :D

Thanks for commenting!

"...many simply loved to drive. They cherished the freedom and control, the joy and exhilaration that came with driving a vehicle." Indeed. I'm so old, my grandparents grew up with horse and buggy, and didn't own cars until 1950. Getting that first generation of old-timers to let go the wheel and stop driving was like a death sentence to them. Flunk the vision test, fail to get that license renewed, and they'd decline swiftly and die. (I swear.) Where I grew up, the road was full of cars driven by knuckles and tufts of gray hair, the driver so bent over with age, s/he was invisible. Fun story! I am horrified at the idea of driverless cars. Anathema!

Very good post today my friend, keep up for success @chrisroberts ◕ ‿ ◕✿

Tip! An excellent updated myth! Though I need to know who won the race. Does it mirror John Henry?

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