Cheers! :) I think if I had more than 5minutes that last bit would have involved Nancy going out to the car, not Richard, and finding a nasty surprise.
I think poor Barry will get a stern talking-to, and then they'll all have a good chuckle about never having to entertain the Nancy's again!
Hehe, I'm not quite sure it was a guilty laugh, more of an obnoxious cackle. Or a 'muahahahaha!', coughs, chokes, then coughs up a rogue fly, and continues cackling. (The things I think of now that the 5-minutes is up)
Awesome job weaving this story so masterfully. I love how she tried to dodge the judgement from snooty neighbors!
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Cheers! :) I think if I had more than 5minutes that last bit would have involved Nancy going out to the car, not Richard, and finding a nasty surprise.
I think poor Barry will get a stern talking-to, and then they'll all have a good chuckle about never having to entertain the Nancy's again!
you did a phenomenal job with 5 minutes! The alternative end sounds intriguing, too.
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Oh, sorry! I meant that five-minute-segment. I wish I could write that much in 5 minutes!! Haha! :D
haha, I feel you!
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Oh my! A gross-out, a horror/thriller (Barry put me in mind of the movie Ben), and a guilty laugh to wrap it up! Well penned.
Hehe, I'm not quite sure it was a guilty laugh, more of an obnoxious cackle. Or a 'muahahahaha!', coughs, chokes, then coughs up a rogue fly, and continues cackling. (The things I think of now that the 5-minutes is up)
Kids!! You can always count on them to get you into trouble !
20 thousand flies... eeeeww
I think the next prompt quite tells how I feel about it hahah
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-373-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-hate
Oooooooh, "hate". I'm sure I can do something with that! Haha!
Thanks for today's prompt! :D
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