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RE: Why, Barry, Why? (#weekendfreewrite)
Awesome job weaving this story so masterfully. I love how she tried to dodge the judgement from snooty neighbors!
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Awesome job weaving this story so masterfully. I love how she tried to dodge the judgement from snooty neighbors!
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Cheers! :) I think if I had more than 5minutes that last bit would have involved Nancy going out to the car, not Richard, and finding a nasty surprise.
I think poor Barry will get a stern talking-to, and then they'll all have a good chuckle about never having to entertain the Nancy's again!
you did a phenomenal job with 5 minutes! The alternative end sounds intriguing, too.
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Oh, sorry! I meant that five-minute-segment. I wish I could write that much in 5 minutes!! Haha! :D
haha, I feel you!
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