That's really epic feedback... I don't think about what I'm doing so much but I love to hear how other people interpret it and the things they point out... I would never have thought that about the line lengths so... Thank you!

It's fun creating the images too.. I'm glad they added that in, because it gets me thinking more and ultimately enables us to add more value and meaning into the post :)

So excited about this... just did my Day 2 Post if you have time to read it at some point... I look forward to reading yours today too!

Exciting times ahead!

With love
Hart Floe Poet
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