Is this a good ad?
Hello Steemains,
Today I want to know your opinion on one of my ads. In my position, I can never fully know what the consumers want. A piece of paper can get me a sale but to what extent. Can you guys assist me with the following:
Would you read this or is it too long?
How fast will this go in the trash?
What I'm I missing? Maybe statics form that area code?
How can I Improve this.
I have this as well would this work better?
Also a little update that I'm doing with funds in case you want to consider doing this as well. Percentage break down of what you make
Save 10%
Spend 20%
Invest in my companies 40% (you can use this as saving for your start up
Stocks 10%
Crypto 20% Till I make enough to day trade it. Also thinking of buying steem with 60% of the 20%. So you might see my vote power reach a few thousand by the end of the year with summer being prime time.
Why would you write that you can speak Spanish in English? There is a typo, you wrote professional when it should say professionally. In the second add you wrote 'some', maybe get rid of that word or change it to 'interested'.
Thank you crypticat! I will definitely update that! Maybe I should bold the Spanish part as well since they won't read an article in English.
Always happy to help
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