Never, Never Give Up (An Original Poem)

in #positivity7 years ago

Sometimes I lay on my bed
Late at night
Unable to sleep
I wonder what tomorrow brings


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The day has been tough
Facing one problem after another
With no solutions in sight
Will tomorrow be better

I have tried my best
But progress seem slow
How long will I be stuck in a rut
Before the way forward becomes clear


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I am hanging in there
Refusing to give up
For I believe in myself
To create my own destiny

Failure becomes my teacher
I move forward each day
Now my dreams have become a reality
Because I never, never give up


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About this poem:

Everybody has experienced at one time or another low points in their lives. These tough and difficult times, where the problems seem insurmountable. As the saying goes “Tough times don’t last but tough people do.” So for all those who are facing tough times now, hang in there and don’t give up. Have the courage to believe in yourself despite what others may say or think. These difficult times will mold you into a stronger person. And one day without you realizing it, you are living the life of your dreams.

For me personally, I have been very disappointed that 2 of my recent articles earned less than $1.00. For a veteran minnow like me who joined more than 1 year ago and have more than 1,000 followers, this is a big blow me. However I believed in my mission as a motivational blogger and in spreading positivity one post at a time. Therefore I will continue with my mission and in time I will be able to touch more lives. If you believe in what I do, kindly resteem this post.

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this is an awesome post !" When the going gets tough , the tough gets going !!" keep up the great work ! I know the feeling all to well , I have been heres as well over a year , and have over 2000 followers and get no money for up votes on most posts ! Unless I first pay randowhale / minnow booster / booster !! Thats if I have SD to do it , just to get my post going and keep it up on the page long enough to get more up votes ! LOL! Otherwise I make nothing !! But I enjoy blogging anyways and running my contest ! I get a ton of positive vibes from my #pocontest which cheers me up if im feeling down !
just so you know , even though you already entered a post in my Pop Contest , you can still use that tag for any positive blogs you do if you want !! it will help spread more Positivity on steemit , and may also get you more up votes with more views !! Thanks for sharing ! Upped and Resteemed !💕✌👍💕✌👍

Thank you my friend for your support and encouragement. I enjoyed writing too and hope that my post will inspire others but a little financial reward will be great.

Yes that is always great ! We will see what the guest judge picks late SATURDAY night !👍👍👍💙

Looking forward to the results.

haha ! Are you also @ionlysaymeep !?!? As an alt account !

nope...just trying to help

OK cool ! Haha thanks!👍👍👍


I too, find myself very discouraged by the drop off of responses to my posts.
I write inspirational (I hope) and thought provoking, self revealing
Prose, where I lay my soul bare.
I cannot get into all the 'bot' stuff; what does that say about
My work, if I must rely on non-human constructs to
Automatically upvote my writings?
I initially came to Steemit, to
hopefully make some $,
But I am staying now
Because of this way
Of formatting my
♥Work.♥



About your poem @positivesteem, one positive critique; you lack punctuation,
interrogative lines, with no question mark?
Perhaps you meant it this way.
Steem on!

Point taken. I don't quite like question mark in poems but I will give it a try.

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Please be possitive and move on my friend.I am not in a condition to give advice, only want to tell please keep in touch with the people. Have a great day friend.

Yes, I am definitely moving on.

Fabulous post! Yes, I believe that tough times are inevitable on the road to success. They are like a test... how badly do you really want your dreams to become a reality?

We can always take solace in the fact that tough times make us stronger, teach us about ourselves, and pave the way to our goals.

Thank you for your encouragement and support. I know that if I preserve I will succeed. Wishing you the best at Steemit as well. Following you now.

Ahhh yes, @positivesteem!! We have all been there and those of us who have not given up are still here. Consistency is key, visiting, commenting and upvoting others you find share great content, and continuing to put out quality work yourself will pay off. There is more minnow help now on this platform than ever before and more of us jumping in to help the new people find their way and make the best of their journey here on Steemit. I find it is best not to place my focus on earning $, but on sharing my passion and engaging others to build a strong community. It is incredibly rewarding to bring people together for common purpose, and we have much more opportunity here together, than we do on our own. Financial rewards are just bonus for me.

I really like your post and love how vulnerable you are about how you're feeling. Glad you are real with what is. Thanks for sharing. Hang in there with us--we're doing it!!!

Thank you so much for your kind comments and encouragement. I am still hanging in there. I believe that my posts can inspire others, and that is my primary motivation.

If it is your primary motivation than you have already succeeded. You can settle into enjoying the bonuses!!! Bless!

I am very happy to know that people are already inspired by my post. A

I defintely will. Thanks for your encouragement

Cheers my friend. Wonderful poem.
Yes, it seems like the slump in the middle. I'm sorry to hear about your rough spot.

I'm here to help cheer you on. Love your posts. I'm one of your loyal followers... and I follow few people.

Keep it up. Do an air high five to me. Jam on. Rock it. Keep truckin. PositiveSteem to the moon.
Cheers bud.
Nice poem.

I appreciate your support so much.

Yeh, times at Steemit are tough, auto voters seems to be the way to get rewards, more than manual ones. But persistence is the way to go, as you write in your poem. A good one to share with us, for sure, since I can imagine many Steemians face these touch times. Interestingly, I noticed this week some more votes on my posts, also more ReSteem. But I think that has to do with the type of posts I wrote, as well as my continuous engagement with Steemians in other channels resulted in the luck I got with a couple of orca's voting for me. Hang in there, and stay positive! You are still travelling? When so, enjoy that to the MAX!

Thank you so much for your encouragement and support. Can I know which channels you use to engage with other Steemians.

Discord and Steemit.chat p2p mostly, got there through interaction on Steemit. I also am sometimes on SteemStem, they support science posts that I sometimes make. General channel may also be a place, but never been there really.

I am also on Discord and Steemit.chat, but what channels are you active in?

Mostly p2p chat with Steemians I meet along the way and the channel I mentioned, SteemStem, and now the new Massivevibration, and sometimes in one of the promo channels like the music channel

Yea it can get real depressing especially when you giving it your all and the darkness still strangling you.

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