"Poetry Dice Entry:" Shaking the keys

in #poetrydice8 years ago


That forgotten book begs to be open,
every religion is frightened after see true dust,
there is a ray of sun,
an intoxicating scent,
that warns of the hidden corners of your walk
implores the experiences, and the memories
give me the ambiguity coming from your words
each letter is a mole on your neck, hidden puzzles
I see your shoulder to my side
let me know your prologue that leaves me chained
drunk and addicted to your surreal words,
let me clean the dust of your footsteps
Let's go to your house to think about nothing
nothing is everything, even if it spills flaws
in full darkness the paragraphs denote the infinity
let me observe you in the room without even touching you
I walk your steps with lyrics of nostalgia
you open the padlock, shaking and you watching me
shaking the keys, thinking of the sound of the present
let's jump to freedom, forget the rules
forget the meat and look at the gray buildings
denoting complicated life
which release routine flares
and disguise the ocher sky
the click of the music
leaves us breathing deeply in bed
with your naked sheets
while the smoke of Mary Jane
draws a path to nothingness
we stare at each other and nothing happens
I lie on your pillow and nothing happens
you ask me Why we don´t read?
"I just want to read you"
just don´t do anything


Ese libro olvidado pide ser abierto,
cada religión se asusta después de ver el verdadero polvo,
hay un rayo de sol,
un aroma intoxicante,
que advierte de los rincones ocultos de tu caminar
implora las experiencias y los recuerdos
dame la ambigüedad que viene de tus palabras
cada letra es un lunar en tu cuello, rompecabezas escondidos
Veo tu hombro a mi lado
avísame de tu prólogo que me deja encadenado
borracho y adicto a tus palabras surrealistas,
déjame limpiar el polvo de tus pasos
Vamos a tu casa a pensar en nada.
nada es todo, incluso si derrama fallas
en plena oscuridad los párrafos denotan el infinito
déjame observarte en la habitación sin siquiera tocarte
Camino tus pasos con letras de nostalgia
abres el candado, tiemblas y me miras
Sacudiendo las llaves, pensando en el sonido del presente
saltemos a la libertad, olvidemos las reglas
olvida la carne y mira los edificios grises
denotando una vida complicada
que lanzan llamaradas de rutina
y disfrazan el cielo ocre
el clic de la musica
nos deja respirar profundamente en la cama
con tus sábanas desnudas
mientras el humo de Mary Jane
dibuja un camino hacia la nada
Nos miramos y no pasa nada.
Me acuesto en tu almohada y no pasa nada.
me preguntas ¿Por qué no leemos?
"Solo quiero leerte a ti"
simplemente no hagas nada


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Wonderful! This is such a beautiful poem. Agreed, nice flow. I was whisked away into another world. Romantic. I really feel lile this might be your best one yet!

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Yes you can use it, I don´t think can do another poem, :) thanks for your words.

Very good, I normally don't like anyone else's poetry but this was an exception.

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Amazing use of the dice! There is a nice flow and good imagery. This part is one that really resonates with me;

denoting complicated life
which release routine flares
and disguise the ocher sky

Thanks for passing by dear @wandrnrose7 that part I like a lot ^_^,
I´m trying to do my best in english <3

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Pond James pond what happen with ur minimalism?

Thanks for ur time!! ^_^

Muy bonito tu poems. Interesante los imagines que sale de las palabras cuando se lee. Gracias por compartirlo :)

Gracias a ti por leerlo friend :)

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