Samba

in #poetry9 years ago

Caught
within
the crowd
encircled by
exhilaration

What was I to do?

The touch of
a stranger
felt enticingly
familiar

Syncopated
fever
electric air

It was only
a dance

Obrigada

The rhythm
of my
heart
stands
corrected

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beautifully done, Tina - very artful - the drums discarded suggest spontaneity and the lines reflect that

Thank you so much John :) It's moving week here, so soon I hope to catch up on your writing.

Oh, I know how taxing moving is - we did it three years ago in a heat wave and were in a rental cottage with no ventilation while awaiting our opportunity to move in here. Not wanting to do a repeat of that. I know the challenges and the stress :)

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Thank you so much. I'm honored :)

You're welcome

So beautiful. Very moving!

Thank you! :)

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It must have been a hot guy :)

I was feeling feisty :D Thanks Dee!

love it!

Thank you :)

Dram.. I wish to play dram!!

You should give it a try :)

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