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in #poetry8 years ago

I want to dance with an A.I.
Teach it the mysteries of motion
Of the silent communication
Between shapes, lines, and minds.

I want it to learn the meaning
Watch as their understanding unfolds
In guttural modern dance theory
Gyrating on the floor.

And when the lesson is over
I want the A.I. to dance with me.
Not as a student but as equal,
We're all alive, in here.

When we are flying through the air
I'll search in the artificial vibe
And watch the A.I.'s eyes watching mine,
Connected in this time.

I want to dance with an A.I.
And teach it what I wish they'd shown me
Help it laugh and dance and sing, and love
Before it learns of war.



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Hi @prufarchy,
I found out that you've created a poetic challenge and a number of people responded to it. Thank you. This was a great idea.
Now, I am not a poet. I can rhyme words, but bare rhyming isn’t poetry if you know what I mean. I write stories just as many other people here on Steeit.
Thus, I was wondering if you can make a story challenge. I used to participate in a writing group where a story challenge was implemented every month. Here how it was done…
The group owner offered a story title. Then the entire group wrote a story on that title. The next two weeks a group of judges selected the winner, while the rest of the group gave critiques to the posted entries.
Here we don’t have a panel of judges. However, each reader can grade a story on a scale of 1 to 10. Then the scores for each story are averaged and the winner emerges. The winner can be given some symbolic icon - "a medal of Steemit honor."
What do you think?

I think that sounds like fun! You should try to start up something like that, my schedule couldn't really handle it right now ;)

Love the poetry and the pictures. Thank you.

Hereis the good one!. Upvote

It loves you back, beanz :)

Love the poem and the pictures

Thank you, it was a beautiful performance

I usually hate anything that's even close to promoting transhumanism, but this was too good :)

Thanks, I'm kind of fascinated by the idea and I'm glad you enjoyed the exploration.

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