Hollow Earth - Poetry Piece - Tell A Story To Me Contest By @bananafish
We reached to a point where we almost destroyed this planet, due to evil habit
Everywhere just we are seeing a mess, compassion and gratitude is very less
Planet earth gave us so much, what is happening now we never saw like that such
To build our materialistic world we are destroying mother nature, human being is turning into heartless creature.
If we will continue this heartless and materialistic race then we will remain as fruitless beings, we will lose all meanings
We are rejecting the blessings, we are changing the default settings
Life became like empty glass, humanity need truthful class
We have to open our eyes to see what meaningless process is going on, humanity misguided by a con.
The picture of future is foggy, collectively we can change the picture, so it's not time for i, it's time for we
If life process will continue this way then people will forced to live underground, and it will continue with round and round
We are hearing the stories of underground bunkers, how many can afford it and then what about the hungers?
Earth is also a limitless being, some human beings are making this earth hollow to fulfill their greediness and we all are not seeing.
Whatever things are showing to us are false, on ground level we will see different disease
If something happens due to foolishness of humans, do we are going to find the underground solutions?
How underground life will look like, all hopes will get a shake
When mass disaster will take birth, then humanity needs shelter of hollow earth.
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Very enjoyable. The way you strung together the deeper message flows nice.
Thank you so much for finding the deeper meaning in my piece. Stay blessed.
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Nice poem, great use of rhyming couplets.
Thank you so much for your appreciation and kind words. Have a blessed time ahead.
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I really like the deeper approach you took here, and the various ways you interpret hollow. From a hollow for bunkers, to the hollow of becoming heartless creatures, to the hollow life like an empty glass. We are gutting the planet, and this really carries that messages so very well.
This line couldn’t put it better:
We are, we are rewriting what is normal for the planet, and it is killing it. Your poem is a beautiful and inspiring warning, that i hope is heard. You have a lot of meaning in here, and i could spend a lot of time telling you how well written it is, but that is what makes poetry, how very much so few words can hold, and you really have delivered there, i am honoured! Thank you so very much <3
@bananafish, Thank you so much for finding the meaning and for appreciating it. Human beings should become blessing to earth and not a burden, and only we can decide and make sure if we are becoming blessing or burden, both aspects have their own fruits, one is abundant way and next one is most disastrous and painful way. Stay blessed.
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I hope humanity will stay away and not destroying Hollow Earth too. I can not let that happen.
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Yes. Mother nature gave so much to us and may be always going to give, it's our responsibility to protect mother nature. Stay blessed.
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