RE: Hollow Earth - Poetry Piece - Tell A Story To Me Contest By @bananafish
I really like the deeper approach you took here, and the various ways you interpret hollow. From a hollow for bunkers, to the hollow of becoming heartless creatures, to the hollow life like an empty glass. We are gutting the planet, and this really carries that messages so very well.
This line couldn’t put it better:
we are changing the default settings
We are, we are rewriting what is normal for the planet, and it is killing it. Your poem is a beautiful and inspiring warning, that i hope is heard. You have a lot of meaning in here, and i could spend a lot of time telling you how well written it is, but that is what makes poetry, how very much so few words can hold, and you really have delivered there, i am honoured! Thank you so very much <3
@bananafish, Thank you so much for finding the meaning and for appreciating it. Human beings should become blessing to earth and not a burden, and only we can decide and make sure if we are becoming blessing or burden, both aspects have their own fruits, one is abundant way and next one is most disastrous and painful way. Stay blessed.
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