Horror Vacui

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

                Muse

The tip of an iceberg
        sits in my whisky -
sinking the titanic with her fury
                 of indifference;

a round globe spinning
to the way things used to be.

Silver for a bullet,
a bullet for a tooth -
no eyes, no eyes -
but if you had blinds,
        don't worry,
the sun hated you too.

A casket shaped flask
        waxing poetically:
brushing fingers sensually,
        steel eyes gazing
prophetically gone with
the wind, no push to send
us careening over the edge;
or to hang our livers out to
dry for the next sky burial;

        no waves to drown
                our plastics in.

                Memories

"Do you know what drowning's like?"

                I ask, naivety
a perfect, unbroken circle
        of marriage rubber
        in my back pocket.

My feet stick to the tiles,
        house parties in
drag - all soles melt into
        a ball-less blacktop.

The crooked picture above
the mantelpiece microwave
grins - or smiles, crookedly -
muting the trumpeteer's glorious,
        god anointed announcement -

"the door is closing, and will not
                        reopen."

        Awaiting the next train
stop painted black with ash-

ash wood columns four postering
silk suffocating a silhouette:
        someone I once knew.

                        Moments

"Does anyone know what death's like?"

        I ask, two dreamcatchers
reflected dancing and twining together
as they twist above an emergency
        broadcast frequency on stasis:
"repeat" playing backwards across
a smartphone with a spiderwebbing
screen - hands up; now out to the
side! where we hung up our keys and
hats and scarves and all the things
        we used to wear to keep out
the sun and the water and the wind
                        and the others;

        or, maybe, just to keep our heads
                on our shoulders.

                Monuments

Shed these layers like lizard skin,
                my fellow man, my kin,
        devour our past selves like
condensation collectors pressed
        against glass ceilings
collecting dust like wellfare
in the corners of their eyes.

        Brush the dust, if you will,
an eye for the finer teeth.

We, condensation collectors
collecting dust in the corners
                of our eyes
        like comic books;

        us, becoming real
        like superheroes;

        we, reborn like
                civilization;

        us, becoming death,
the destroyer of worlds;

and we, undone like
        colored yarn

                spooling
an unregulated fishing net;
        or a nuisance;
        or a noose.

        And all the bodies
        float to the top,
the tips of icebergs,
praying for a ship
        to find them;

the last sip before
you are forgotten
        and the door
        clicks shut.


 
a piece on searching for meaning where there is none for Poetic Surge Contest themed "emptiness"

        First there was Chaos, the vast
immeasurable abyss, outrageous as a sea,
                dark, wasteful, wild.

What hath we wrought upon this world:
                a distinct lack of focus?
        a distinct lack of love?
a distinct lack. this is for you.


photo is from Tine Poppe's 'Winter Solstice' collection and is used with her permission.

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Written very beautifully. The format you chose here with the spacing of paragraphs and words honestly adds a lot- something very underrated in many poems is the way you cut off each stanza. As someone who enjoys playing with spacing in my own works, I can appreciate the care you've taken.

The sum total of...mini-poems? I'll call them that, yes- they connect not so much in theme, but in the sense that they each describe an aspect of humanity. The first: the visage of one who has given up entirely, almost as if the rest is a story told by a drunken patron at a bar. The second, the fleeting nature and sad departure of memories one holds most dear. The third, the moments that make the memories, small and insignificant in the grand scheme of things, and yet so seemingly important in the present. And, of course, the fourth and final segment, the grand achievements us humans believe we have reached, only to be forgotten in the sands of time, or by another swig of alcohol.

This poem spoke to me a lot more than many poems I've read because it perfectly described an ideology that I enjoy toying with and occasionally humoring- the idea of nihilism, that everything is eventually meaningless. This idea is incredibly frightening, and, to me, can be one of the most horrifying things to consider when experiencing pieces of dark media.

I think you did a very good job at capturing the essence of nothing, and this is something not many can achieve. Kudos to you.

Conner, these truly are some of the nicest words, mate, thank you so much.

being given an avenue to step outside the view of 'the writer' and see the poem from the eyes of a reader, it means much and more, good sir.

elated by the read and that the piece meant enough to you to leave this comment. again, @noughtshayde, thank you, mate.

This was a perfect, well thought out analysis. It really was an enjoyable piece of art. My most recent poem was titled, Sifting through the sands of time. After seeing you reference it here , I thought perhaps you would like to give me an analysis? I'll be happy to upvote your wise words. Have a look. I'll be stopping by to check you out!

I like the way you present thoughts in this piece. It was very natural and really set the introspective tone of the poem(s). I also like how you carried the drinking metaphor throughout and it felt very realistic and honest to me. Great write.

Thank you for being a #blockchainpoet.

if everything i write can feel realistic and honest, then i'm putting the right amount of myself in every piece. i never want to stray to far from who i am, so this means a lot to me @moeknows, thank you.

As someone who suffers from the hidden scars of PTSD, and a man who has been to hell and back with alcoholism, I have spent many nights alone, and insane, with thoughts that ring so eerily similar to your words here. Bravo! Upvoted!

couldn't be more honored that this piece has found your praise, my good sir, thank you so much for taking the moment to comment and letting me know that it connected with you in such a way.

absolutely honored, @futuremind, unequivocally so.

You are most certainly welcome @carmalain7, I look forward to reading your work in the future!

It reads very well. It immediately appeals to me because of the rhythm (and perhaps the cynicism.)

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is it possible to blush so hard you can be seen through a screen? one of these days i think i will discover the answer.

Thank you so much @sunravelme and @Gmuxx, the most honored to accept.

The first and second poems have so much voice that they speak to the reader with precision - the first poem truly ringing with whisky and drowning plastic... and the second to HS awkwardness..

glad the voices came across so strongly, @lonestarpoet.

i find voice to often be one of my natural weaknesses that i always visit a few times in the editing process, so it's always a joy to hear the time was well spent.

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