BLACKOUT POETRY / Darkness

in #poetry9 years ago (edited)

WHAT IS A BLACKOUT POEM?

A blackout poem is when a poet marks out already established text– like in a newspaper– and starts redacting words until a poem is formed. One interesting feature of a blackout poem is that the text AND redacted text create not only a poem, but also a work of visual art.

DARKNESS

Here is another of my experiments with blackout poetry. It is titled, DARKNESS. Below the poem is the text it was created from.

OTHER BLACKOUT POEMS-

GRAPHITE
PREVIOUS LIVES
FALSE KEEL
INDUSTRY

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I tried this over the weekend, and I must say that it's harder than it seems. Kudos for making pieces that are coherent. I'm having trouble finding a mass of text that I'm comfortable making poetry with. This line connecting words thing in this piece is a great idea if you can't find something sequential.

I find them relaxing, like working on a puzzle. Not every page works out, I find dictionary pages give the most diversity and possibilities for creativity.

I would imagine dictionaries would have that wiggle room. If all else fails, I'll try that. But, for my first one, I'm thinking I deserve more of a challenge.

Pages from novels work well, but sometimes it is hard to break away from the Theme the author was working with.

Wow. Amazingly interesting and inspiring.
First time I hear about this style/approach.
Thank you for sharing @beginningtoend.

No problem, give it a try.

I think I'll do...may be a good mix between my works and very interesting poetry.
Thank you again!

This is so inspiring! So love it!
I"ll try with an old book to see what happens:)
Thank you:)

There you go, have fun.

I will pull some Tolkien out of my shelf to make some interesting word art with :)

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