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RE: The mermaid - day 54 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

in #poem7 years ago

I see you're really telling a story, I love the fact that your story enjambed from one stanza to another it's quite a style I adore, would have been more rhythmic should it have rhymed however it's not a problem, I love your style of writing it's amazing.

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I do try rhyming but seemed to be too difficult in this one. Thanks for the feedback

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