SteemitPoetryContest #4- Emptiness inside of mesteemCreated with Sketch.

in #poem6 years ago (edited)

 There is always something mysterious about Poems. Not everybody enjoys it, but they don't hate it.  


~And those who understand poems are mostly the people having a different Sense of Humor.


So, I am writing a poem for @terrycraft's Poetry Contest.

Emptiness Inside of Me
Emptiness, it's an echoing voice.
Emptiness, it's a crying smile.
Where the star shines in morning,
and the darkness feels so nice.
The Love that says goodbye,
where the Ocean flows in the sky.
Where you can feel the sea breeze from a dessert,
and a dangerous storm nearby.
It's not a fact if you smile,
neither it is if you cry.
Just be who you are or who you can be,
Or atleast, just don't hesitate to try.



Hope you guys enjoyed it :D
Let's participate together :)

Have a great day, guys !!!
Stay Cool and Stay on Steemit !!! ~

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Hi @rayne122,

Just dropped it, looks like your steemit account is gathering support. Keep at it and keep growing.

Love & Kindness

Up-Voted for Creativity and Consistency on Steemit!

Thank you very much. You keep it up too. :)

But you should start blogging :)
I am following you now :) Would be glad to see your posts :)

Hey @rayne122.... well, while I didn't mean to keep you waiting, you can go check out my respond to the witness @mahdiyari, hopefully it will entertain you:

https://steemit.com/steemfollower/@steemfollower/help-steemfollower-com#@dj123/re-steemfollower-help-steemfollower-com-20171113t101457002z


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I use Steemfollower too.. :D
And I did vote @mahdiyari for witness a month ago when I started to use Steemfollower :)

Well let's hope @mahdiyari makes serious consideration of allowing us to share steemfollower points freely with others. Right now steemfollowers could fall into the trap of focusing on earning the 5% commission whenever people sell their time. Time they will never get back.

Key Knowledge so you understand the real value of Steemit: it's much-much more valuable attracting loyal fans and real following, instead of for a few SBD. 1 Loyal follower can over time, 6 months, 1 years, 3 years, 5 years....can easily earn you 1000xmore Steem especially as their account grows this is long term fan based that gives a growing-income. Way more valuable then getting 1 or 2 Steem upfront selling your time away.

The problem is people who use Steemit/Steemfollowers are not taught this Truth.

Right now he gains much more than not, and Witness in the top 20 earns 260 Steem a Day!, and outside the top 20-100 earns 60 a day....that's not too shabby.

So I will reserve my vote for @mahdiyari until only after he gives us the free choice to give our time to someone else (and perhaps earn loyal followers as well).


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Keep working on your writing, thinking, and other skills. This new writer has some great tips to help you get to your next level:

https://steemit.com/life/@drsinmongwong/a-life-of-abundance-begins-with-these-3-basics-skills

Ow ! You really put those words in a great way.
I already voted for him though. But seeing you comment, I want to remove my vote from him.

But, did you use write any blog post or something ?

Hi Rayne122,

believe or not...no I am not a 'blogger', but I have other experiences helping and working with many others.

what's more important is not to focus on what the next person has or does but work on what you have

See the example I gave to an Orca (at least that's what I was told):

https://steemit.com/life/@rok-sivante/the-plateaus-and-dangers-of-ambition#@dj123/re-rok-sivante-the-plateaus-and-dangers-of-ambition-20171105t025735860z

Note: I think it's best to treat all minnows, dolphin, orca, even whales....everyone is human, all deserve some measure of respect and fun..grin

Regarding the vote, that's entirely your choice, but if you don't exercize it , then you are not exercizing your choice....you are letting the heard and advertisements make a decision for you.

If you like my idea, then upvote the post on @mahdiyari site....note: even if its an old post, he needs to see that others will read and decide for themselves.

In steemit you have to believe that....even sometimes, smart dolphin and even orca listens to minnows :)

YEAH ! That's what I am aiming for.
A human to human relationship.

But the Orcas here hardly interacts with the minnows.
Unless minnows are the ones trying hard for the interactions.
It's the system how our society is created.
Having an Orca's support is a great deal. But the support given by them is a rare case to experiance. :p

As a follower of @followforupvotes this post has been randomly selected and upvoted! Enjoy your upvote and have a great day!

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