Armenta. SCI-FI "RPG-Writing Contest" #1

in #nextcolony-contest5 years ago (edited)

Dear friends, as you know, I love Science Fiction. And a couple of days ago I discovered a most interesting call: SCI-FI "RPG-Writing Contest" #1. Unfortunately, I discovered it late and I couldn't reestimate it or vote for it (I'll make a post with the references of the project later on?). Anyway, I explain a little:
It's a video game that is being developed in steemit. According to @art-universe, who makes the call, the launch of the game is very close, and:

NextColony will be a massive multi player strategy game; BUT it can and will be much more. It is a whole universe with many many planets, species, heroes and much more. So YOU, yes WE ALL, can invent our own stories for this wonderful game. This contest wants to invite you to be a part of it with writing your first story in the NextColony-universe.
For more information, you can visit this site: https://nextcolony.io/. It's an exciting experiment (and it seems very ambitious) and I'd love to be part of that world of fiction. Then, I'll dare to participate with the first chapter of a Science Fiction story focused on characters, to see what happens. I leave it for the goodness of your readings and I am grateful.

abeja, amapola, amarillo


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Armenta


Hidden in the cargo compartment, Armenta consumed her last supply of water. Anyone who looked at her would have seen a small girl, a crushed face and thin lips. Eyes like burning coals and fast like squirrels. Her hair was dirty and collected in two thick chestnut plaits that reached her heels, but now she had rolled up like a scarf to fight the cold. His complexion was dark, slightly blue, although somewhat lighter than that of the nomadic tribes of the Mador, where he came from. Centuries ago, after the Great War that had brought the radioactive rains, his people became nomadic and renounced their old name and any authority of the ancient days. It was a people free of gatherers and shepherds who traversed a small area of the western savannas, where life was still thriving and the land seemed to heal.

Hanging from her small muscular back, she had her fighting stick, dark and hard wood, with three red notches: one for each death in combat. It was just a twenty-inch stick, heavy, made from the hardest wood of the bogo trees, collected by the shamans. Like all fighting sticks, hers had engraved the symbols that a shaman had dreamt for her: the story of a rabbit that could jump to the Moon, beautiful and red in the sky of Mador. That's how she found her totem. She stopped being a puppy in training to be a hunting dog, a jackal, a rabbit that could jump to the sky. Armenta wore the braids curdled with small poisonous darts with feathers and wore a shirt and trousers of thick cloth with the colors of her troop (ochre, which means quick death; black, which means inevitable pain; green, which means pity). She wore bare feet, marked with training scars, calloused heels and dirty nails, even with dust from the Earth she had left behind. If anyone saw her at that moment, they would have seen a girl with teeth clenched by the cold, hungry, with eyes lit; but they would also have seen a warrior with a purpose. Armenta had not boarded the Sipu-I to colonize, nor as one more of the slave herd that led to death from toxic syndrome in the sulfur mines of Delta. She came to kill.

*****

Armenta squeezed into the container. That morning, she had bid farewell with a prayer of good journey to the sheep that occupied the container and had cut her throat. She hid the hairy corpse among the last containers. Now he was taking his place. The cage stank of shit. She controlled her breathing so as not to vomit the bile. If she was discovered, she would be as dead as the sheep.

Why did Armenta take such a risk? Why had he abandoned everything he knew and cared about, his people, his troops, his roots, his planet? If someone had asked her, she would have said "Maka".

Maka, being dragged by slave hunters. Maka herded with electric sticks. Sweet Maka, the summer holiday dancer, her little sister. Her only living family member.

Since radioactive rains ruined the Earth, numerous colonization expeditions had been organized, but labor was scarce on a planet exhausted by radiation and ecological catastrophes. Only small territories offered enough sustenance for life. And those lands were much coveted. So the people of Armenta had decades scourged by resource exploiters, rustlers and slave hunters.

Armenta stirred her memories as her cage rattled along with the others in the truck.

Then, through the holes, as she was transported with the rest of the animals, she saw it: The main dome of the camp was gigantic. Planted against the horizon, it was a polished sphere that reflected a celestial fire. Beyond, a capricious and numerous grove crowned with yellow flowers rose. Did they graze on the pastures? Extensions of green pastures. To the right, cultivated fields, dotted with small domes that looked like family units; they seemed to have no end. Hundreds of slaves (many of them Madorans) did cultivation work on that land, and sang. She did not understand. They did not look sad in spite of the necklaces of subjection.

They deposited her cage in a large, noisy dome. Slaves separated the cattle. A Sirilite foreman led the work with precision. The slaves obeyed willingly and carefully. Armenta calculated the right moment: the bulk of the working group came to lead a small troubled flock to the exit ramp.

She left the cage and crouched behind the pile of sacks of feed. Everything was fine... almost.

Now there was a boy in front of her, looking at her with his mouth open. He was a warrior from Mador, clearly. Though he wore a dark robe, his long plaits betrayed him. For Armenta, his eyes were a slide through which her own fear fell. She held her fighting stick.


Gracias por la compañía. Bienvenidos siempre.

 

En mi país hay tortura, desapariciones, ajusticiamientos, violaciones masivas de derechos humanos.
¡Libertad para mi país!


Soy miembro de @Equipocardumen
Soy miembro de @TalentClub



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Really cool that you found the time to participate!!! I would add following tags to this post:

nextcolony
scifi
fiction
writing

So you can reach more readers and also the nextcolony team members!

Have a good time and stay tuned! :-)
best, Martin

Thank you for the visit and the recommendations. As I publish from Steempress, whenever I want a tag to be in the first place, I have to edit later, because the blog arranges them alphabetically.
I'm already having fun!
Happy day, @art-universe / Martin

Wow! Excellent. Wonderful story.
Thank you very much for your commitment.

Thank you!
I am very happy that you liked my text. I am very grateful for the possibility created by this contest. Now I have a novel start. This is very valuable to me.

THANKS FOR CONTRIBUTING with this amazing story!!! The WINNER post is HERE

And if you want to participate with a new story check out the new contest post HERE

The RULES are modified a little bit - so be sure to follow them to qualify... for example just one entry is needed :-)

Thanks again so much for your great contribution and I hope you are happy with your price!

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