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in #microfiction5 years ago

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Jhon always referred to her wife as a saint , every Sunday she attended mass, she always offered to help anyone who needed it, prayed at all times and from time to time went to a nursing home that was nearby to accompany those who were alone.

He was about to knock on the door when he heard some noises inside the house, the first thing that came to his mind was that he was being robbed, he opened the door with his key and stealthily advanced to the bedroom, He had just advanced a little when a shirtless man who was adjusting his pants, came out, quickly rushed against him to repeatedly hit him in the face, until he managed to subdue him.

-Get me something to tie him- he shouted to his wife.

She immediately brought him a tie with which they held him tight, and then call the police. Half an hour later, the criminal was taken into custody, who, months later, was found guilty of the crime of breaking and attempted robbery, for which he would have to spend three years in prison.

The Sunday after the arrest Juan and his wife went to church as usual, but this time people murmured as they passed by the couple, Juan just took her hand and gave her a tender kiss on the cheek.

The next monday morning Juan threw the underwear of the stranger into the incinerator of the company, while his wife prayed in the church.

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Interesting story! So my thought after reading this is that Jhon (or Juan?) came home when his wife was having an affair.

That is right, but he never accepted it. Anyway, every man that did it with his wife, ended in prison or death, while she just stayed quiet.

In the original story that I wrote several years ago, he always said that his wife was been raped and his honor injured:

"When the commissioner arrived, Juan was about to give the seventh machete blow to the rapist, who insisted until death, that he was the lover,"

"Juan hugged his wife tightly and promised her that he would always take care of her."

"What you tell me is the truth, I will not believe otherwise even if I see personally," Juan told his wife.

Original story written in spanish, please forgive my bad english, I am learning.

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