The End Where We Begin -- Killer Poetry Contest Round 8

in #killerpoetry7 years ago
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This is the end where we begin

To walk alone in separate paths

The end where we'll see what we should have been

If our roads have not crossed in the past


I remember it like it was yesterday --

You, and your sweet summer smile

We were both scared, but we chose to stay

To prove the world that together, we could go miles


I remember our dreams

And the promises we whispered beneath the starry sky

But when the clouds turned suddenly dim

You became distant -- like our dreams, just like the sky


Then we became stagnant

We filled hours with silence and disdain

Our fights -- my tears -- became painfully constant

While I try to save us both from the terrifying rain


But this love is killing us

And all that's left of our sanity

I've lost grip of what I wanted to last

The harmony we had once has become a cacophony


It's an obvious goodbye, one that hurts the most

I will always cherish every memory of what we have lost

Someday, maybe our paths would meet again

Would you even care to stop and tell me where you've been?


I hope you find your happiness

And that your freedom would make you feel complete

I know I'd be busy healing my scars with my tears

As I move on and walk on my bare feet.


This is the end where we begin

The part where we whisper our regrets, our goodbyes

I hope you find a home before the night comes in

Or come back here and pretend that the sun will never rise.


Thanks for reading! Have a good one!



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This pain my heart deeply. So much that I almost cried. huhuhu. Why are you so good at swaying people's emotions? huhu lodi! <3 This is very nice lyxng, I can feel her pain.

"Someday, maybe our paths would meet again
Would you even care to stop and tell me where you've been?"
"This is the end where we begin
The part where we whisper our regrets, our goodbyes
I hope you find a home before the night comes in
Or come back here and pretend that the sun will never rise."

These are my fav lines. Simply splendid! Great great great job! Walang halong charchar! <3 :))

Thank you! huy dai, where have you been?? namiss kita. <3

as always such wonderful and emotive poetry

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