Coming Home - An Original Song by Joe Breheny "IFC S1 R38 entry"

in #ifc6 years ago

I wrote the song Coming Home back in 2002 as an ode to overcoming personal setbacks and addiction. This song was a sort of coming of age song for me after coming through some pretty dark years. The lyrics are heavy on self motivation and creating a new life for my self.

I chose the picture of my son Nick as he has always been one of my biggest motivators.

COMING HOME


If all these tears were nickels baby, I’d own the world ten times over yeah
Without you I’m a man alone
If all these dreams were realized then maybe I could get on with my life
This feeling cuts me to the bone
Take a number, sit down boy and wait for your dreams to come true
Look around, open up your eyes, don’t tell me that’s the best you can do
Oh, this feeling maybe it’ll carry me home
Oh--------h this feeling is giving me strength to go on
Welcome to your new life boy, take care of yourself and you will find joy
I swear to you, you’re gonna make it to heaven
You’ve got to build your dreams and cherish your plans
It’s up to you it’s in your hands your freedom it comes from deep within
Don’t get down boy it’s ok you know you’re gonna make it just take it day by day
This feeling you know it’s gonna carry you home
Oh--------h this feeling it’s the best you’ve ever known
Cause I want to feel the fires that burn, so deep within me, drive me to learn
Carry me forward into the bright unknown tomorrow
And I want to be somebody in this cold, dark and desperate world
Be a hero to someone, and in my footsteps they can follow
I’m coming home!






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Is that you actually singing? If it is, you've got a very nice voice. :D Who's the other singer? Are you playing one of the instruments? Being a parent is never easy, there are always challenges, some tougher than others, thankfully you got yourself together for your son and for yourself. :D
God bless you and your family. :D Have an awesome day! :D

Thank you @frostyamber, Yes that is me singing the backing vocals and all of the instruments with the exception of the drum tracks.

You're welcome @jbreheny. :D You have a lovely voice. :D Who is the other singer? The two of you sound wonderful together. :D Have you recorded other songs together?
God bless you and your family. :D Have an awesome day! :D

That is also me singing in the background.

Really, it sounds like two different people singing to me, that's very cool :D
Thanks for taking the time to answer my many, many, questions. :D
God bless you and your family. :D Have an awesome day my fabulous friend! :D

Thank you for taking an interest in my song. No such thing as too many questions.

You're welcome, its a lovely song and I really like your voice. :D I'll have to check out your posts for others. :D
God bless you and your family. :D Have an awesome day my fabulous friend! :D

Awesome sentiment. It's amazing to be a parent. It turns an ordinary human into a hero.

What a great way to put it @wholeself-in, although I don't always feel like a hero I know that in his eyes I am.

I have been telling @jbreheny who is my husband he has a nice voice for over 20 years. He has many songs and they are all beautiful.

I was finally able to listen to it without buffering from hell problems, vey nice tune, and melody, you should take my song entry and jingle and make it a song, I think Ed Privit is pretty busy these days.

Thank you @bashadow. I’d love to have someone with production talent redo the mix for me. I’ll have to check out the song and jingle entry. Is that for the IFC, and who is Ed Privit?

It was back about 2 months ago - Round 22 It was aout music. Here was my entry
Ed Privat is @edprivat, he is a singer songwriter, he was going to take my lyrics and build it into a song, along the lines of grateful dead style for me. But he is a pretty busy person, but a real musician.

Lol thanks for the compliment! @dashadow I am working on your song: ) but I understand if it's taking too long !

There's a new lyrics writing competition if you are interested !

I saw that, and still interested in hearing your version of my little song and didee. I just thought that if @jbrheny was interested, it would be pretty cool also, tow different versions so to speak.

I have been thinking about the Lyric contest also for a new tune. I hope to have something in a few days, but not sure yet, writing is not easy sometimes.

No worry man ! I think @jbreheny is very talented I can't wait to hear his version!!!

Good luck on the lyrics contest!

I just got back online after 3 days in a true dead zone. I will definitely check it out. Also am following @edprivat as well and will be checking out some of his stuff.

Although anything I was to submit would probably be a raw video version as I am not proficient in any type of recording software.

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