Showing My Poetry Skillโ๏ธ (Weekly Contest)
It's my first post in here, nevertheless I know @milakz for a while๐
My name is Yuliya, and I'm a poet and prose writer.
โณ๐, ๐๐๐ธ๐พ๐๐พ๐๐ ๐ถ ๐
๐๐๐
My very first book of poems has been published in 2016, and I've named it "๐ฆ๐ธ๐ซ๐ซ๐ต๐ฎ๐ป" (original: "ะะพะฑะปะตั"). That is how it looks โฌ
Today I can't even imagine my life without poetry in it. It's everywhere: in my joy and my depression, in my love and my hate. My being and my nothingness.
โ๐พ๐๐๐๐ถ๐๐ ๐ป๐๐๐๐พ๐๐ถ๐๐
I'm gonna post two poems. The first (called "Old Antonio") is my own one. And the second is my official translation of Mykola Bidenko's poem from Ukrainian into English.
๐ช๐๐น ๐๐๐๐๐๐พ๐
๐๐ ๐ฝ๐พ๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐๐-๐๐พ๐๐๐ฝ
๐ท๐พ๐๐๐ฝ๐น๐ถ๐
๐๐พ๐๐ ๐พ๐ ๐ป๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ป ๐ถ ๐ฝ๐๐๐พ๐น๐ถ๐ ๐ธ๐ถ๐๐
๐๐พ๐๐ฝ ๐ถ ๐๐พ๐๐๐๐ ๐ท๐๐๐๐พ๐๐ ๐ธ๐ถ๐๐น๐๐
๐ถ๐๐น ๐๐ถ๐๐
๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐ฝ๐ถ๐น ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฝ, ๐ฝ๐ถ๐น ๐๐๐พ๐๐น ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฝ๐พ๐๐,
๐ถ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ถ๐๐ ๐ฝ๐ถ๐น ๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐น ๐๐ ๐ฝ๐พ๐,
๐ถ๐๐น ๐๐ฝ๐๐๐โ๐ ๐๐๐๐ฝ๐พ๐๐ ๐๐๐ป๐ ๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ ๐ป๐๐.
๐ฉ๐ ๐น๐๐๐พ๐๐๐.
โ ๐ฎ๐, ๐๐ถ๐ ๐ท๐ ๐น๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ท๐๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ ๐ป๐พ๐๐, โ
โ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐,
โ ๐ท๐๐ ๐ท๐๐๐ถ๐๐ฝ๐ ๐พ๐ ๐พ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ป?
๐๐๐๐ฝ๐พ๐๐... ๐๐๐๐ฝ๐พ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐
๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ถ๐ ๐๐๐น
๐๐๐ถ๐๐ ๐พ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐พ๐ป๐
๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ถ๐
๐๐๐๐ฝ๐พ๐๐...
โ ๐๐ถ๐๐๐น ๐พ๐๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ ๐๐พ๐๐๐๐
๐พ๐ ๐๐ถ๐ ๐น๐ถ๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐๐๐
๐๐ฝ๐๐๐โ๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐ท๐๐
๐๐พ๐๐ฝ ๐๐ฝ๐ ๐๐๐๐น๐๐ ๐๐ป ๐๐ฝ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐น ๐พ๐ ๐ฝ๐พ๐ ๐๐๐๐
โ'๐ ๐๐๐๐
โ'๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฟ๐๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐น ๐พ๐ ๐๐พ๐น๐ ๐๐ ๐๐
๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐ถ ๐น๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐น
๐ถ๐๐น ๐๐ฝ๐พ๐ ๐๐ธ๐๐๐ธ๐ฝ๐พ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐๐๐
โ'๐ ๐๐๐๐
๐๐ฝ๐๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐๐ ๐พ๐๐๐๐น ๐๐๐๐๐๐
๐พ๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ ๐ฝ๐๐ถ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ถ๐๐๐
๐๐พ๐๐
๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐
๐๐๐ถ๐๐ธ๐ฝ๐พ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฝ๐พ๐๐ ๐๐๐ถ๐๐๐ ๐๐ถ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ป ๐๐ ๐ธ๐ฝ๐๐๐
๐๐๐น ๐ฝ๐๐ ๐ท๐ถ๐น โ ๐ป๐๐๐
๐๐๐๐น ๐ฝ๐๐ ๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐ ๐ โ ๐ถ๐
This post has been written for the Show Your Poetry Skill Weekly Contest organized by @abu78.
I invite @tinochka2 and @zaria56 to participate as I know they are the great poets and song writers.
ะะฐะปั ะฟะตัะตะฒะพะดะฐ ััะธั ะพะฒ ะฝะตั
ะ, ะฐะปะต ัะบัะฐัะฝััะบะพั ๐
I invite @tinochka2 and @zaria56 to participate as I know they are the great poets and song writers.
ะญัะพ ะฒั ัะฐะบ ะฟะพัััะธะปะธ? ะฏ ัะตะฑั ะบ ะฒะตะปะธะบะธะผ ะฝะต ะฟัะธัะธัะปัั...))
ะฆะต ะผะฐั ะทะฝะฐัะตะฝะฝั ัะฐะบะพะถ ั "ััะดะพะฒั ะฟะพะตัะตัะธ" ๐
ะะน, ะฎะปะตัะบะฐ! ะกะฟะฐัะธะฑะพ ะทะฐ ะบะพะผะฟะปะธะผะตะฝั!))) ะะพะฑะตะดั ัะตะฑะต ะฒ ะบะพะฝะบัััะต, ะดะพัะพะณะฐั!!!
ะัะบัั)))
ะขั ะฟัะตะบัะฐัะฝะพ ัะผะพััะธัััั "ะฝะฐ ััะตะฝะต"!)))
Fantastic turnout!
Thank you!
ะะฐั ะฒััั ัะธะผัััััั ัะบัะฐัะฝััะบะพั ะผะพะฒะพั ัะธ ัะต ัะธััะธะน ะฒััั (ะฝะต ัะธะผะพะฒะฐะฝะธะน)? ะะตะฝั ะฟะพะดะพะฑะฐััััั ะฒะฐั ะฒััั, ะฐะปะต ั ะฝะต ะฒะฟะตะฒะฝะตะฝะธะน, ัะธ ะทะฝะฐั, ัะบ ััะดะธัะธ ะฒััั ัะบัะฐัะฝััะบะพั. ะฏ ะฟะธัะฐะฒ ะฒัััั ะฑะปะธะทัะบะพ ัะพัะพะบะฐ ัะพะบัะฒ ัะพะผั. ะฆะต ะฑัะฒ ััะธะปั, ะทะฐััะฐััะปะธะน ะฐะฝะณะปัะนััะบะพั 1500 ัะพะบัะฒ ัะพะผั.
ะัะน ะฟะตัะตะบะปะฐะดะฐั ะฝะต ะผะพะถะต ะท ัะธะผ ะฒะฟะพัะฐัะธัั. ะฃ ัะตัะตะดะฝั ะฒัะบะธ ะปัะดัะผ ะฝะต ัะฝะธะปะพัั. ะ ะฝะธะผะธ ััะฐะฟะปัะปะธัั ะผััั. ะะพะฝะธ ัะฐะบะพะถ ะผะฐะปะธ ะดะพะดะฐัะบะพะฒะต ัะพะทัะผัะฝะฝั ัะผะตััั.
ะฏ ะพะฟะธัะฐะฒ ัััะพัะธ ัะฒะพัั ะฒััััะฒ ัะบ ะทะฐะณะฐะดะบะธ (enigmas). ะฏะบ ะผะพะถะฝะฐ ะฟัะพะถะธัะธ ะถะธััั ัะฐัะปะธะฒะพะณะพ ะณะพัั?
ะะดะฝะต ะฟะธัะฐะฝะฝั! ะงะพะผั 'ะบัะฝะตัั' ะฝะฐ ะฟะพัะฐัะบั ะฒะฐัะพั ะบะฝะธะณะธ?
Hi! Thanks for commenting. It's vers libre (โfree verseโ) in Ukrainian also.
Ahaha, I know what La petite mort means. I suggest you to watch the movie called The Little Death (2014).
You ask: Why the end is at the beginning of your book? And the arrow is directed to the girls buttocks. So, did you mean this: the buttocks are the end?..
ะัะนัะฝะพ, ัะต ะพะดะฝะต ัะท ะทะฝะฐัะตะฝั 'ะบัะฝัั'. ะะฝะณะปัะนััะบั ัะปะพะฒะฐ ัะฐััะพ ะผะพะถััั ะฑััะธ ะฟะพะดะฒัะนะฝะธะผะธ (double entendre). ะฏ ะฝะตะดะพััะฐัะฝัะพ ะทะฝะฐั ัะบัะฐัะฝััะบั, ัะพะฑ ะฟัะฐััะฒะฐัะธ ะฝะฐ ัะฐะบะพะผั ััะฒะฝั. ะะตะฝั ัะฟะพะดะพะฑะฐะปะพัั ะบัะปัะบะฐ ัะพะบัะฒ ะถะธัะธ ะฒ ะงะตัะบะฐัะฐั . ะฏ ะฟะตัะตะผะธะบะฐะฒัั ะทะฒัะดัะธ ะฝะฐ ะะฐะฝะฐะดั ะบะพะถะฝั 90 ะดะฝัะฒ. ะะฐ ะถะฐะปั, ะผะตะฝั ะฝัะบะพะปะธ ะฝะต ะฟะพัััะฑะฝะพ ะฑัะปะพ ะฒัะธัะธัั ะฑัะปััะต, ะฝัะถ ะฟัะธะฒัั ั ะดะพ ะฟะพะฑะฐัะตะฝะฝั, ะฐ ะฟะพััะผ ั ะฒะธัะฒะธะฒ, ัะพ ะฒัะต ะพะดะฝะพ ัะพะทะผะพะฒะปัั ัะพััะนััะบะพั ะฒะธะผะพะฒะพั. ะฃ ะผะตะฝะต ั ัะฝัะบะฐะปัะฝะธะน ัะฐะปะฐะฝั, ัะพ ัะบ ััะปัะบะธ ั ะฟะพัะธะฝะฐั ัะพะทะผะพะฒะปััะธ ัะฝัะพั ะผะพะฒะพั, ะปัะดะธ ัะฐััะฒะฝะพ ัะพะทะผะพะฒะปัััั ะฐะฝะณะปัะนััะบะพั.
ะฏ ัะฟะพะดัะฒะฐััั ะฒ ะผะฐะนะฑััะฝัะพะผั ะฟัะพัะธัะฐัะธ ะฑัะปััะต ัะฒะพัั ะฟะพะตะทัั.
Indeed that is one of the meanings of the "end". English words often can be a double entendre. I don't know enough about Ukrainian to work at that level.
I enjoyed living in Cherkasy for a few years. I switched between there and Canada every 90 days. To my regret, I never needed to learn more than hello and goodbye, and then I found that I was speaking the Russian pronunciation anyway. I have a unique talent that as soon as I start talking in a different language people magically speak English.
I hope to read more of your poetry in the future.
I just hate to talk to ppl using google translate๐ it confuses.
The image on the cover is an artwork of Dima Krasnyi, I like his artworks and bought a few for my book. It perfectly illustrates the mood of the book: let's call it a nude soul.
Never been to Cherkasy but gonna visit that city October, 2nd. I have a children's book presentation there.
Have a nice time on Steemit!
If your presentation is at the ะะฝัะฟัะพ ะะปะฐะทะฐ (Dnipro Plaza), I have a few friends who live in the buildings across the street. I am afraid their children are all teenagers now so I don't believe I can trick them into going to the bookstore there to buy one of your books.
I featured my "nude" art in an article about a month ago.
I am afraid that I prefer making jokes to making art. I will let people with real talent do art. I did add a second image in a reply to one of the comments below. You paid Dima to use one of his works on the cover of his book.
How much would I have to pay you?
Good luck with your presentation on October 2nd and say hello to the city for me.
ะะฎะปั, ั ะฟะพัั ะฝะฐะฟะธัะฐะปะฐ, ะฝะพ ะฝะต ะทะฝะฐั, ััะพ ั ะฝะธะผ ะดะตะปะฐัั ะดะฐะปััะต? ะัะดะฐ ะตะณะพ?)
ะกะฟะฐัะธะฑะพ ะทะฐ ะฟัะธะณะปะฐัะตะฝะธะต)
ะ ะตัะธะปะฐ ะฟะพะดะดะตัะถะฐัั )
https://steemit.com/hive-197809/@zaria56/showing-my-poetry-skill-weekly-contest
Thanks for sharing with us this beautiful poem
Thanks for the contest โ๏ธ