CONTEST | Monster - Out Of The Box || Man's Deeds

in Freewriters10 days ago (edited)

Greetings steemians and welcome to my blog, as I will be taking part in a creative contest organised by @wakeupkitty which is title monster out of the box

Monster out of the box


Filled with enthusiasm
A man of strength 💪 the most powerful
Which I fear
Even fear itself

For your deeds shall speak
For you both at the gate and on the soil
For he troubles and the people snash their teeth
In fear and despair

At last he was apprehended
And subdued by the law (police)
For no one is above the law
Sentence to several years in a four cornered box
As his deeds spoke for him in court

A Monster in the mist of Monster
Turn to a kitten being torse around like slave
And within the bars he cried and beg for mercy
For he knew that without his Sentence being met he might not see the light

He managed to serve his sentence
And when it was all over the Monster in a box swore to be good
As due to his deeds
He went in as a Monster and walk out a kitten
For no man is above the law


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Por lo visto, los castigos surten efecto. El mostruo cometió unas faltas, fue condenado, y la caja le enseñó a controlarse; al punto de salir hecho un gatito.

Me encantó leerte. Suerte.

Much appreciated thanks

This is really beautiful.. no matter how strong or dreadful you are, just pray the hand of the law doesn’t get you because you might not find it funny when dealing with the consequences of your actions

This is a great entry. Deep, food for thought and it makes me wonder if it's true. For many years I write with prisoners but it feels as if they didn't change.

Fingers crossed for the kitten.

🍀❤️

Yes indeed fingers cross for the kitten

Upvoted! Thank you for supporting witness @jswit.

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