Time To Be Creative : Five-Words Fiction #03 | Three Black Roses In The Black Wallet
I am on cloud nine to build my own wild imagination in this fiction. Then I would like to say a massive thank you to my friend @damithudaya who makes this out of the box contest. May God blessed your life...
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”It’s been a while...”, Said Sam to himself meanwhile riding his old car, Holden Kingswood alone. He frequently build monologue with himself as an autophile
Sam walking on air to drive alone while breathtaking in unknown place.
He didn’t remember anything. All he want just strolling around to the unknow village alone whilst trying to flashback about what happened several years ago.
He looks like miss something there yet he doesn’t know that is dejavu or only his halutination. Or perhaps delution...?!
At the same time when he looks around him, it looks like a vidoe was playing on his pretty round shaped eyes.
Yep, Sam has an oval face and a little beard plus sweetest smile. Adorable face even his body quite skinny.
”Sam... What are you doing on the edge of the river ? Do not try to push yourself hardly ! Come on follow my lead ! I will show you something...”, All of a sudden there is a creepy voice a few meters behind one of the biggest tree, Red Creek Fir tree not so far from the river call him vaguely.
Sam just realized that he parked his car on the main road last hours ago then he goeses take a walk alone & came in to the forest.
Yeah, there is a long river. He didn’t know what happened of himself.
However all he want is find the old house on the old photo which one he found in his parents secret box silently after they passed away.
He wonder concerning that house due to the fact that is looks like he has a big emotional to himself & that old photo. An old house. But again and again he doesn’t know what, why & how.
Sam just trying to follow his °heart & head. °They just led him to find something.
He tries to follow that creepy voice, no matter what. He stepped into the forest till dusk while hold the old photo on his hand. Smoke, humid & freezing on that Friday evening.
Finally he found it. There is an old house and extremely similar with that old photo which one he found on his parents secret box. No. 39A with old brown wood & mustard door exactly like the old pic.
He open the door slowly even if he quite petrified. He switches on his flashlight from his cellphone with trembling hands.
Intentionally Sam touched some of old stuff in that house, it looks like give him strange energy and worst memories. He didn’t mean to kick something with his leg..., `skeleton
”Let me go home, Sam...! Please let me go home...”, Someone looks like whisper, begging & crying on his ears tenderly when Sam incoincidentally step the skeleton.
His mind was blowing and brought him to the pass...
He killed his twins when he was a child, stab with the knife insistently while draw a black rose tatto with the razor blade on his twins right neck.
Cursorily Sam took out a dried black rose from his black wallet with his sinister smile... The black wallet is a birthday gift from his lovely mom & dad who just passed away, too.
Now Sam has three black roses in his black wallet.
Five-Words Fiction :
Village, river, home, old & skeleton
Warm regards,
Intropluv
An interesting fictional story means high imagination. salute me :)
Alhamdulilah thank you a billion, Sir
I highly appreciate it 😊
Thank you for inviting me to this contest, good luck in this edition..
Back at you, my friend...
Your use of descriptive language really brought the story to life. The plot twist at the end, where we learn about Sam's tragic past, was unexpected. It's clear that you have a real talent for creative writing. Good luck in the contest! 😊
Alhamdulillah, a massive thank you for your lovely comments, my friend 🙏🏻
Your words definitely made me melting 😊
It's beyond my expectations 🙏🏻
Yeah, I made it in the midnight actually about 2 hours while listening some old song
May God blessed your life, my brother 😇
My pleasure. 🙂
🤍😇
Guao!!!! Suspenso y terror en tu historia.
Has hecho un extraordinario trabajo con esta historia, que nos deja claro que el pasado de Sam fue muy doloroso y con ministerios por doquier.
Te deseo buena suerte.
Bendiciones
Alhamdulilah I highly appreciate it
A massive thank you for visiting my post, my friend
Have a blessed day 😇
Oh my word! You kept me reading right to the end.
This is not the kind of story that I would normally read but yah, I just couldn't stop reading!
Well done for writing a suspense thriller! I should rather say, a best selling suspense thriller (•ิ‿•ิ)
Good luck for the contest!
Alhamdulilah, your lovely comments definitely made me melting & touch my heart, my lovely friend @patjewell 🥰💖🤗
Sure I knew you are one of multi talented person, too
May God blessed your life, my dearest friend 🤍😇🤗
Thank you my friend!
Blessings right back at you! 🎕
It's an expectant story that leads you to a revealing ending of Sam's criminal past, it was a good twist.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Alhamdulilah, thank you a billion for reading my fiction story till the end, my friend 🥰
Yazz, I put the plot twist in the last paragraph.
You definitely intelligent
Warm regards 🤍😇
I enjoyed reading you. All the best.
All the best to you, too my dear friend 🤍
Thank you for sharing a post in the community and participating in the contest!! Oh wow! Nothing like I expected. It's curious and thrilling. You have used the words nicely without disturbing the flow of the plot. Good work!!
Good Luck with the contest!!
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Alhamdulilah, a massive thank you for your lovely comments my friend 🙏🏻☺️
May God blessed your life
Dear @asiahaiss, your story includes horror, fear, and curiosity in equal measure. I have no idea how many black roses he kept in his black wallet when he died. It is admirable how you managed the five words without disrupting the story's flow.
Check out my entry as well if you have time.
Good luck with the contest.
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Alhamdulilah, a massive thank you for your kindly words, my pretty sista @senehasa 🥰
Yazz, I try my best to make a little horror mix psychopath story in my fiction
You absolutely great how the way you response my fiction story
Wish you best of luck, my dear friend 💞
You are welcome, my dear friend.