Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #31 [English]

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maling daan

bango at tanawin

bulaklak na ligaw


wrong trail turn

the scent and sight

of wildflowers

haiku by Victor P. Gendrano (Philippines)


Welcome to the 31th edition of the Mizu No Oto contest, haiku friends!

Like the previous edition in Spanish, this time too we will double the Best Haiku (therefore there will be two winners), to celebrate the goal, reached and passed, of 30 editions of the contest.

I will not dwell much on it. As I wrote yesterday in the awarding post, my commitments became heavy until the end of June. Therefore, there will be no in-depth article at the bottom of this post.

All the attention, therefore, will be for the photo and for your haiku.

I highly recommend you to write your haiku in the comment, as well as put the link, so the other participants can read and vote all the haikus without having to open twenty sheets.

Good haiku to everybody!


[Traducción Española]

¡Bienvenido a la 31ª edición del concurso Mizu No Oto, amigos del haiku!

Al igual que la edición anterior en español, esta vez también doblaremos el Mejor Haiku (por lo tanto, habrá dos ganadores), para celebrar el objetivo, alcanzado y aprobado, de 30 ediciones del concurso.

No voy a insistir mucho en ello. Como escribí ayer en el post de adjudicación, mis compromisos se volvieron pesados hasta finales de junio. Por lo tanto, no habrá ningún artículo detallado al final de esta publicación.

Toda la atención, por lo tanto, será para la foto y para su haiku.

Los recomiendo que escriban su haiku en el comentario, así como el enlace, para que los demás participantes puedan leer y votar todos los haikus sin tener que abrir veinte hojas.

Buen haiku a todos!

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Best haiku award (2 times): n. 3 steembasicincome shares each

Popular choice award (if at least 5 votes): n. 1 steembasicincome share

Best vote comment (if at least 5 votes): n. 1 steembasicincome share

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For those that want to unleash their poetic potential, here is how this contest works:


• Look at the prompt image and let yourself be inspired by it.

• Write a haiku related to the prompt image. The haiku should be composed by 1-3 short verses with no title. The classical haiku form is 3 verses of 5/7/5 syllables, but other forms are allowed, as long as they remain in absolute brevity.

The haiku should be in English or include an English translation.

• Post the haiku on your blog or in the comment section below this post. If you make your own post, don’t forget to put the link to it in the comment section below!


Don't forget to use the tag:


#haikucontest



Watch out for the @bananafish comment to this post, under which you can cast your vote (and try to win the Best Comment award)



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Prompt Image:



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[photo by @marcoriccardi]


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Do you want to know how we evaluate the submitted haiku? These are the characteristics we search for (but not mandatorily):

• Kireji (切れ字), a cut between the 1st and the 2nd verses, or between the 2nd and the 3rd; the cut can be grammatical, as a sign of punctuation, or it can be a cut in the meaning, like two different images.

• Kigo (季語), an explicit or implicit reference to a season, that defines the time of the year in which the haiku is composed or referred to.

• Sabi (寂), the sense of the inexorable passage of time, the beauty or serenity that accompanies the advance of age, when the life of the objects and its impermanence are highlighted by patina and wear or by any visible repairs.

• Wabi (侘寂), the taste for frugal and natural things, rustic simplicity, freshness or silence; it can be applied to both natural and artificial objects, or even non-ostentatious elegance.

• Mono no aware (物の哀れ), empathy with nature and human life; the "feeling of things", nostalgia, regret for the passing of time, understanding of the changeability and of the transience without suffering.

• Yūgen (幽玄), sense of wonder and mystery; it represents the state of mind produced by the inexplicable fascination of things, the feeling of an 'other' universe, full of mysterious unity.

• Karumi (軽み), beauty in simplicity; poetic beauty reflected in its simplicity, free from preconceptions and moral judgment.

• Shiori (しおり), gentleness; the levity and the delicate charm that radiates from the verses, where things are evoked in the reader without aggressiveness or excessive explicitness.

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Submission deadline: Wednesday 22nd May, 10:00 PM, GMT +1 (Rome Time).

The results will be out on Thursday 23rd May, 10:00 PM, GMT +1 (Rome Time).


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Good haku to everybody!

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Here's my shot:

Church on the shoreline
Grey sky and dull sea linger
A bell marks the hour

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First one that points put the church. And does it in a great way. Loved the time reference there with the bell. Good luck and thanks for sharing.

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Nice meaning kireji. You put movement and sound to my still photo

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Commented on your blog

You haiku reflects the existential conflict that overwhelms the character, it is felt in all its depth. @raj808

Vote your favorite haiku down here:

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There are so many good haikus, but I'm gonna vote for three of them before more awesome works appear making it harder to choose: @wakeupkitty, @salvao and @irvinc. Those are the three I liked the most.

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Thanks 😁💕

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Mi favoritos favorite haiku @salvao @irvinc @felixgarciap @mllg

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@aurodivys, @josemalavem and @salvao are my choice.

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This week's image aroused many sensations in the poets, and most of them felt oppressed by the hopelessness and sadness that occurs when the weather conditions are adverse. It is a good exercise to delve into one's perceptions. I couldn't read them all, but here are a few poems. He sings of lovelessness in his poetry. @isauris; freezes our soul with its atmosphere of restlessness @mllg; struggling with grief @felixgarcia; searches in its thoughts and meditates on lost love @josemalavem; opening paths through darkness how it should be! @josegilberto, doubt, very valid appreciation in that suggestive image.@irvinc; marine solitude is a fundamental element that surrounds the image. Cristiancaicedo; you let time pass in circles and that gives a new effect to photography @lecumberre; positive and romantic love @gracielaacevedo; I like more the vision of your first haiku, it is more original and artistic @wakeupkitty, you surround the scene with a feeling of oppression that generates uncertainty. My final vote is for @josemalavem in the midst of oppression knew how to find the open way. There is always a way out! I liked the broad vision of this haiku. I apologize because this is not my original language and I depend on a translator in this case I thank DEEPL.

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Your translated did a great job!

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solemn clouds
breach the harbor wall
- muted storm

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Wow! I'm reading all the haiku in order of posting age, and I'm growing more and more moved. How can I choose?
Yours is a little masterpiece among little masterpieces... that's what I was thinking about, when I wrote about every single word being essential in a haiku.

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Very nice haiku! Love this one.

Hi! ❤

My entry:

Autumn clouds,
lonely and cold wait.
A calm sea.

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Nubes de otoño,
solitaria y fría espera.
Un mar en calma.

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Muy lindo, @isauris.
Pero con fuertes sensaciones de frío (lo leo metafórico),
calma y soledad.

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Gracias, el suyo también me gustó mucho. <3

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Gracias amiga

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El mar en calma de paz , a pesar de la fría soledad. Hermoso, @isauris.

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Lovely entry! I like the way everything seems more positive if you think about calmness, and no more loneliness and cold

Fantastic picture @marcoriccardi
I leave here a thought, framed in the form of a haiku. I do it in the spirit of participation (I've been busy!):

Alone and Weary.
Thoughts travel on memory
Where are they going?

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The pic inspires melancholy, but it's a bittersweet mood you transmitted very well. I like the fact there's no answer...the supended question is what I feel more in your haiku

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Thank you!

Edge-of-town mood flows
Along with heavy Spring clouds
Over me they wash

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Not sure if your haiku arrived on time... anyway, it's quite a complex one, there's a good sense of mono no aware and sabi

My entry:

the lonely dock,
the wait became endless
under the lantern

as always an inspiring photograph @bananafish

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I liked this one that mentions the lantern. Thanks for sharing.

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is the beauty of the haikus, the details seen and not highlighted are charming @cristiancaicedo

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Hi! My friend @sacra97.
A pleasure to read you.
You got a nice hiaku

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thank you very kind words I love the haikus @mllg mi maria luisa

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Very good, melancholic, haiku. It struck me a lot!

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grateful for the words of support, they are always very kind, since I discovered the haikus I love a very special expression @bananafish

Dear friends of @bananafish and participants in this contest, I leave here the link of my post and then the transcribed exercise. Thank you and good luck!

https://steemit.com/steempress/@josemalavem/mizunooto-cadaimagentienesuhaiku-edicin31ingls-v8efynemlz

Foggy time
and sea in stillness
Open road

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I like the translation on your link better:
foggy weather
and sea in stillness
open road

That is perfect. You create a tension between the calm of the sea and the nebulous quality of the environment. The open road cuts through it, a clear path. It's a satisfying balance.

Estimados amigos de Steemit y @bananafish quí dejo mi haiku en ambos idiomas para su lectura y comentarios. https://steemit.com/contest/@evagavilan/mizunooto-everyimagehasitshaiku-edition31english-dub58ivapj

Momento de espera,
meditando en el viento.
Cavilaciones
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Moment of waiting,
meditating in the wind.
Cavilations

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More beautiful in Spanish but lovely in both languages.

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Thank you for commenting @agmoore

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/Se les saluda apreciados participantes de esta competencia./
Greetings for everybody!!
/Mi enlace/ My link:
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@mllg/bilingual
/Qué tengan un lindo día/
have a nice day!!

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Tras un adiós,
en intensa quietud.
Desasosiego.
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After a goodbye,
in intense stillness.
Unrest.
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Recoges muy bien la atmósfera de la imagen. Me gusta. Saludos y un abrazoote.

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Vayan primero mis disculpas, @damarysvibra , por la demora en responderte, no se porque no te vi. Te encontré hoy al revisar el reporte de respuestas.
Muchas gracias por la lectura y el comentario y me encanta te gustase.

Happy new haiku week! :) I´ll be reading others entries...

https://steemit.com/spanish/@salvao/mypoemformizunootoenglishedition31-alsoinspanish-r1cys65pg1


La gris espera
ha llegado a tu orilla.
Amores mustios.


The gray waits
has come to your shore.
Mouse loves.

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De los que he leído, uno de los más poéticos. Saludos y gracias por compartir este haiku @salvao

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Bello haiku que habla de amores pasados, @salvao.
¿insepultos en grises?
Creaste toda una atmósfera que como lo es la auténtica
poesía lírica puede ser apreciada desde distintos ángulos
y crear vínculos con muchos lectores.
Congrats!!!

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Me encantó, muy hermoso @salvao.

Saludos. Acá dejo mi entrada.
https://steemit.com/steempress/@irvinc/mizunooto-everyimagehasitshaiku-edition31english-akqvw6o1ah

Callado invierno.
Pena en mi pensar.
Soledad marina.

Quiet winter.
Pity in my thinking.
Marine solitude.




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Este quedó genial. Sencillo, pero sobrio. Felicidades. Gracias por participar.

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Un haiku cargado de emoción, de ese sentimiento de vacío que nos trae la tristeza. Hermoso.

Excelente día para todos.
https://steemit.com/steempress/@damarysvibra/mizunooto-everyimagehasitshaiku-edition31english-vt0ejjmmk5

Quietud marina

el cielo cargado fluye.

Pensándote voy.


Marine calm

the charged sky flows.

Thinking, I'm going.

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Quizás me equivoque, pero explicaré por qué me gustó el voy del final. La imagen muestra casi en el centro a una persona sentada que acapara la atención de todos los que se fijan en la caminería. Me dije ¿"voy"? ¡pero si está sentada! Luego noté que más adelante, por la caminería se ven dos personas caminando y me imagino (quiero creerlo así) que uno de ellos es quien piensa en este haiku. Eso me sorprendió para bien. Saludos y gracias por compartir.

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Hola @cristiancaicedo. Gracias por tu comentario, pero no, el voy lo coloqué en referencia al proceso del pensamiento en que se encuentra inmersa la persona sentada, ese pensamiento que se repite con constancia y del que no logramos desprendernos fácilmente. Saludos.

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Vaya novela que me hice a partir de una palabra. Entiendo lo que quiso expresar perfectamente, aunque mi lectura inicial haya estado equivocada. Muy buen haiku. Saludos.

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Hola, amigos de la poesía, esta es mi entrada:
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@oacevedo/mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-edition-31-english

Dark clouds in the sky
Crying on the boulevard
My melancholy

Hereby my entry. Thanks for the challenge.💕 and ☘to all.

Endless is the road.

You live so far, overseas,

clouds surrounding me.

https://partiko.app/wakeupkitty/mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-edition-31-english-mdnylgak?referrer=wakeupkitty

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Totally loved it. The distance, the longing, the landscape, everything is there. Thanks for sharing and good luck.

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Thank you very much 💕☘

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I couldn't open your post!

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Very beautiful: longing and nostalgia in these verses. Good luck!

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Interesting and very nice haiku, @wakeupkitty
A mature haiku!
Congrats!

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Thank you, why couldn't you open my post?

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Sweet wait with patience
in the shadow of the sea,
her elusive love.

Hello @bananafish my entry: https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@felixgarciap/sweet-wait-haiku-contest-week-31-english

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Este es muy romántico, me gustó mucho el último verso. Saludos.

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Vooy a leerte y por allá te dejo el comentario.
Feliz día.

Haiku lovers: This week @marcoriccadi proposed a photograph of the complex dedicated to the sweet Madonna dell'Angelo, on the Adriatic coast. The devotion that is offered to the Virgin is similar to that offered on the Caribbean coast; so, I felt very alluded to the image.
Therefore, in my post for the contest, I did four exercises. I leave the link, if you want to review them: https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@gracielaacevedo/mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-contest-week-31
Here, I leave you two of those haikus, making the reservation that the last one, in the red letters, is the one that competes.

Full of art and flowers,

the church on the rock waits,
Man thinks, he doubts.

Llena de arte y flores,

la iglesia en la roca espera,
El hombre piensa, duda.

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In mystic airs

the man imagines.
Behind him, the sea.

En místicos aires

el hombre imagina.
Atrás de él, el mar.

Here's my entry for this week's contest:

It's autumn again
loneliness runs to the end,
with so much patience.

Here's the link to it.
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@cristiancaicedo/patience-my-entry-for-mizu-no-oto-edition-31-eng
Greetings and thanks for this contest. Good luck everyone.

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Profundo, la soledad perenne, parece que huye pero solo espera con paciencia su momento. Saludos.

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Es así, una huida paciente. Gracias por leerlo y por comentar. Saludos.

Saludos, queridos amigos de @bananafish. Dejo por acá mi entrada al concurso:
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@aurodivys/mizu-no-oto-cada-imagen-tiene-su-haiku-edicion-31-ingles

Under the grey sky
my sadness is tucked in.
¡False promise!


Bajo el cielo gris
se arropa mi tristeza.
¡Falsa promesa!

Grey clouds overhead
Cold winter's day by the sea
Alone, he sits and chats

I also wrote a post, but it seems to be having weird formatting issues on Partiko.

https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@nmcdougal94/entry-for-mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-edition-31-english-7pt3m5wc

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A good description in macro, of the panorama that the photograph shows.
Good captcha, @nmdougal94

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Thank you, I'm glad I achieved what I was trying for. I'm enjoying this poetic exercise, it's been a very long time since I wrote poetry of any kind.

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Wellcome!! I like this exercise too much, too
Practicing impruve the quality
(Excuse my beginner English, please)

Hola, acostumbro dar reestim a este post de convocatoria, sin embargo, no me sale la opción. Es decir, sale pero al hacer click apare la lista de quienes han dado upvote o se abre la pantalla para escribir comentario ¿A alguien m{as le está ocurriendo esto o es por culpa de la pésima señal de internet que tenemos en Venezuela?

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Para hacer resteem ve al perfil de @bananafish desde alli si podras. @sayury buscar el post, no entres en el veras la fecha de resteem.

man made boundaries
would have us turn away
from the sea


This one was very difficult. Many of them have been for me and I haven't submitted them, but I think my process on this one is interesting and I describe my process in the actual post:
https://steempeak.com/haikucontest/@owasco/squall
Thank you all for writing with me. It's an honor.

Hello, @bananafish tribe!
I leave my entry:

A far lighthouse
Above the horizon.
Long waiting line.


Un faro lejano
Sobre el horizonte.
Larga línea de espera.

https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@adncabrera/whatilearnedaboutnotsayingandahaikuformitzunooto-xez42df9di


Hugs for everyone!

My entry:

Walkway by the sea,
sitting in contemplation;
light shines through the clouds

https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@wolffeys/my-entry-mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-edition-31

Thank you, @bananafish!!!