The Broken Needle : Day 3 Nanowrimo Freewrite Writing.

in #freewritemadness6 years ago (edited)

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The rush to the hospital was done leisurely, the two women thought the poor boy was joking or been too feeble, either of the two ways is not enough reason to have let him faint out just like a smoke, a human being like them for that matter.

Sluggish walking by the mom to get her car keys, the illiterate sister did more harm by moving the poor Bonny and twisting him, jabbing him here and there in a customary archaic way to bring a fainted person back to life. Practise that has sent more than neccesary to an untimely death, the main course of infant mortality in the early age up to nineties was due to this kind of act. Whenever a child had a seizure, instead of the mother-in-law who came to help in taking care of the boy to do it in a civilized way, she began to jab the poor baby here and there, sending more shock than neccesary, bending him and causing more damages to the underdeveloped part of the baby's body. Those who managed to live through this were lucky, the not so lucky one were never seen again. Am glad I was lucky.

Before Bonny's mother could come back to the dining table to pick up his son, he was already growing cold, in the arm, it's been more than three minutes now. Grabbing him by the waist and pushing him against the wall, the mother watched as his only son was dragged on the floor like a mop, he was actually a mop this time, the way Lucy dragged him made his trousers clean the floor. She finally helped out when they got to the door, carried him into the back seat and head over to sit down, looked at her son and didn't know if it's to smile that everything is going to be ok or stiffen her heart the more due to the disgrace his father brought into the family. And the hurt into her heart.

A womanizer who dares several time to bring in many strange women home, and those dirty pussy whore never declined despite seeing there wedding picture in the sitting room and everything to roll out a message that the home belongs to a married couple. They, with no shame spread there legs and laughed hysterically on many occasions as she, the home builder walked in. She once came into the house to meet a part of women, up to three in number holding different body part of her husband and moaning deeply as each part is caressed for optimum pleasure. Married as a cutting and coming from a conservative home it took her years to know that's what was called threesome. Seeing the husband she married fully in the arms of another woman, this single sight brought down some dagger into her heart, stabbing it through till no blood is left in the heart. The more reason the woman's heart was dead cold.
The neighborhood have known this for awhile and it has brought so many shame whenever she walks into the street, a wife with no respect is no wife. She couldn't cry out anymore, holding Bonny in her arm as she made him suck of her breast, she was busy contemplating if to transfer the aggression of the father to the son. The devil has come so near to tempting her to strangle the baby as her own revenge. Her husband's loved Bonny so well, he primed him the beginning of his strength.

It was with this same hatred and anger with deep resentment that Bonny's mom turned on the engine and drove so fast to the hospital, thinking the boy was dead so it's time to gather some record of sympathy, when people see a high speed car which belong to her with Bonny at the back not sitting, they knew something was wrong, the mass deception worked so well that by the time Bonny was admitted with doctors working on him by placing there high charges volt on him to jerk him back to life, half of the street neighbourhood was already at the hospital, praying for the life of the poor boy, no one knew what he has been through.

Bonny looked deep from the gap in between the living and the dead and wished his time was up, so he could finally go to rest and leave this life of abuse. How did he ever come into this kind of a family to have faced such an abusive and an unrepentant mother. The doctors instructed the nurse to increase the volt, jamming the high charges on him.
"Arhhhh..... " Bonny jerked back to life.

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