5 Minute Freewrite Wednesday (tiger)
I apologize to those who are trying to keep up with Chozzy. I am
using today and yesterday's prompts together. So, sit back and
enjoy the ride. Things may get a bit bumpy.
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Charlotte was sticking her fingers through the fence to try petting
Chozzy.
"Kelly is he ok? How is his leg?"
"He will be fine in a few weeks if not sooner. He is a tough little guy.
Sometimes I think he is even tougher than a tiger."
Charlotte smiled at that and started talking to Chozzy in their special
way. She said, "how is my little tiger doing?"
Chozzy smiled his biggest smile but she knew he was hurting. "Aww
Chozz, you need to get better fast. You best take it easy ok?"
Chozzy shook his head.
Kelly said, "I need to have you bring me a sample of the food grain.
Chozzy drew where it was. Its in a green bin out the back of the
building...........
Here are the past few parts. Be sure to catch the rest via my blog.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@pixiehunter/5-minute-freewrite-friday-whiteboard
https://steemit.com/weekendfreewrite/@pixiehunter/weekend-freewrite-3-25-18-part-1-3
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@pixiehunter/5-minute-freewrite-monday-scout
I find the best piece of free writing stuff here on your profile. @pixiehunter ...
"Chozzy smiled his biggest smile but she knew he was hurting. "Aww
Chozz, you need to get better fast. You best take it easy ok?"
These lines sounds great in the whole story..
Thank you for the comment. Those who leave kind words and hope, keep me going.
Yeah @pixiehunter ...go ahead buddy, i appreciate your skill of free writing, you are doing a great job ..
Just out of curiosity after checking out your blog. Why is it you never upvoted anything you left comments on? Even all the ones you resteemed, you didn't upvote once. Some of your own posting didn't look too bad, so maybe stick your foot in the door and post and see what happens. But if you never upvote anyone, chances are they will never upvote you.
Yes, i do agree with your suggestion rather an advice, but what i always think is about the value of my upvote which is very less, :D sometimes i think ...does my upvote really matters in the steemit community...because the posts i comment on have big users with reputation not below 50...
But to many even if they are low on totem pole, it gives them hope of possibly something more for them. Giving them reasons to want to try harder. I almost gave up on the platform because very few upvoted my posts. I feel bad and felt bad when all I could give out was a 1-2 cent upvotes. It is not the cost that matters, it is the thought that counts. You will likely have more people look into what you also have to offer on the platform. You would also be surprised how many whales set the rate at 1-3 cents so they can upvote more than a handful of posts. Otherwise it makes you look money hungry and nothing more. That you want payouts from other peoples posts, should they upvote your comments. :-)
Yess sir ...thankyou for your valuable suggestion..i respect your opinion. Will surely follow your points... Thanks once again @pixiehunter
I'm happy to help. I have been on the platform for well over a year but was slow going until I found my way around. It is all a learning process. I didn't even do my own post until months after joining. But I did leave great comments and upvote when I could. Those moves alone earned me great motivators as followers.
Aw, poor Chozzy but I am so happy to hear that he will be OK. Do I see another hero in the making? : )
Indeed we do. Hoping he heals quickly so they get those kids to safety. I smile each time I type his name. It is very fitting.
The best thing about your continued wrintings is that... They are short to be read without getting bored and also they are beautifully presented easily to understand but for that your should have followed the series..