It Is Time For The Freewrite To End XII (Last Action Hero)

in #freewrite7 years ago (edited)

The story so far

How do I explain this in a few sentences? Miss Rose saved the freewrite group. Pulp is a bad cop.

Mrs Black has saved the life of Miss Rose. There was a car chase. Pulp was chasing the black car with four women in black suits (including Mrs Black) and Miss Rose. They managed to lose Pulp and have found a warehouse. They think they are safe.

Click here for the previous chapter.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-freewrite-to-end-xi-the-black-car

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Episode 12: Last Action Hero

They look out the window of the car. It is surrounded by Mr White, Mr Black, Mr Grey, Mr Green and Mr Brown. The Riviera Hounds. All with guns, pointing at the car.

“Don’t worry,” says Mrs Black. “We’ve got this taken care of.”

The 5 Hounds are surrounding the car. Mr White looks intently at the passengers and makes a hand gesture towards Mrs Black. He is asking her to leave the car.

However, the next thing he hears is the sound of a whip. The next thing he sees is the whip around the bottom of his legs. He is then being pulled across the across the floor.

Who is using the whip? “Don't mess with the Simgirl! I got your back.”

“That will be the last thing you'll ever do,” says Mr Brown.

He then directs his gun in the direction of Miss Simgirl. Mr Green does too.

“Wrong Mr Brown.”

Mr Brown and Mr Green can feel the cold of the pistols on the back of their neck. It is Mr Black and Mr Grey.

“Who are you?” asks Miss Simgirl.

“Mr Black. I am still the husband of Mrs Black, despite what she might say.”

“What about you?”

“I'm Mr Grey. I think I'm in the wrong story. I prefer to make love, not war.”

Mrs Black gets out of the car. “There are some conveniently placed wooden chairs over there. Let's tie them up.”

“Are we going to call the police?” asks Miss Simgirl.

“I have a better idea,” Mrs Black replied.

Mrs Black looks over to Mr Black and smiles. “Thank you,” she whispers.

“Before we tie these gentlemen up, I think we deserve a bit of fun,” suggests Mrs Black. “Would you like to go first Miss Simgirl?”

“Ok, what do I do?”

“You know,” replied Mrs Black.

Miss Simgirl walks over to Mr Green. She then gives him a good kicking on his meat and two veg. Mr Green is writhing on the ground in agony.

“That’s a bit below the belt, Miss Simgirl, but do we really care?”

Mrs Black walks up Mr Brown and does the same. “Ok, tie them up.”

“What about Mr White?” asks Miss Simgirl.

The phone rings and it and Miss Simgirl answers it. “Ok, Mrs West. Gladly.”

She then walks towards Mr White. I don’t think I need to describe the next bit.

Mr White, Mr Green and Mr Brown are all now tied to chairs.

“I suppose we should ring the police now,” answers Mrs Black, “However, Pulp is their leader. We can’t allow these to escape.”

“I have an idea,” says Mr Black. “We’ll take them back to the house. We have a special guest coming.”

To be continued

Actually, I wrote Episode 13, the Final Episode and here it is
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-freewrite-to-end-xiii-the-final-episode

Miss Simgirl is played by @simgirl
Miss Rose is played by @wandrnrose7

Pictures copyright free images from Pixabay

If you would like to catch up on the whole story, here is a link to Part 1-7 Omnibus Edition. You can then follow the links after each episode.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/it-is-time-for-the-freewrite-to-end-omnibus-parts-1-7

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Well now THAT was a spicy side to @simgirl and @wandrnrose7 that I didn't expect to see! Rawr! Interesting story!

Good post,
Also, today I am helping the freewriters by delivering today’s prompt: Fried Chicken
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Thank you. It was great fun to do, but the story must end.

I am so glad to see a bit better vote on your post here!!

Thank you. At this point I appreciate comments more, because I know people have read it. That is very important when you write a series. It is nice when people say they want to go back to the beginning and read it.

for sure!! And that was fun!! I think you need to read it and video your reading. Then you can post it both to DTube and Dsound. :)

Not sure about that. A big maybe. I'll never say never though. :-)

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