Forgotten clothes! A weekend freewrite.
As Danny parallel-parked in front of the bar, he knew who he wanted to live for.
At that time his best friend Katie was walking on the sidewalk, he had established a beautiful friendship, they shared many things in common. They had arranged to meet at that bar to continue talking, drink a few beers and greet other university classmates.
He got out of the car and addressing her, he greet saying:
Hi Katie, you are always so formal that meet the agreed time.
She pleased to kiss him on the cheek and holding hands they entered the bar. There an atmosphere of joy with romantic music invited them to relax and have a pleasant time.
Danny walked through the tables, receiving a surprise, without believing it there was his mother, when she saw him, began yelling at him saying many pointless things, so he then said:
"Mama, what are you doing!" "What are you doing?" Damn you ...
She kept insisting to keep claiming, Katie blushed and told Dannie's mother that she should calm down because it wasn't time for arguments.
They then sat at the table with her. Danny, taking advantage of the fact that the situation seemed to have been relieved, called the innkeeper and ordered some beers with pastries.
When they were brought and everyone calmer, he asked his mother what was the cause of his disgust.
She started talking by telling both of them:
Is that when I returned home this afternoon after touring the stores I realized that I left a
forgotten clothes
Then they both laughed. Danni without thinking argument.
Well, I think you have been a bit exaggerated with the claim, we already thought you were crazy.
We will accompany you to the store to pick up those clothes.
After a long while they went to the store and there, the manager, seeing her, handed the clothes.
It was a pretty white dress that she had sent to repair.
They surprised then asked her about the dress. And she smiling said:
It is the dress I married. I intend to give it to my son's girlfriend.
Katie and Dannie held hands saying. Well, you're in front of her.
...
The end.
This is the weekend freewrite challenge. I am using @mariannewest’s #weekendfreewrite to write this piece please read here.
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| Sunday | A curse |
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| Monday | Left in the trash |
| Tuesday | Manipulation |
| Wednesday | A nationwide contest |
| Thursday | Creature |
| Friday | Fake video |
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I found it a bit hard to read. A very formally way the characters talk to each other and confusing because you use his/her through each other I think.
Danny is a girl? You wrote "her best friend".
I do not know what you mean with this sentence:
_ Hi Katie, you are always so formal that meet the agreed time._
I think my English is not good enough 🤔.
I also do not understand why the mother is reacting like that but understand the line of the story. Did the mother expect her son to get married to someone else?
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Thanks for commenting and taking the time to read. Danny is a man and the mistake is in that first sentence.
Fixed error.
It is a bit difficult to express so many ideas in summary form.
Best regards
Estupendo trabajo tratando de seguirte el paso en tus escritos, gracias por la invitación, estar entre tus invitados constantes en todo un honor @felixgarciap