The Room Of The Eyes (Original Short Story) - Week #15 Fox Tales

in #foxtales7 years ago

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Hannah felt the sharp pain in her right foot. She looked at the stump she hadn't noticed and something looked queer. There was a sudden flicker of light. She bent to observe it closely and it blinked. It was an eye. An eye? She turned up suddenly and noticed the eyes everywhere. She slowly began to retract her steps and felt another pain in her right foot. She turned to look. Another stump, another eye. She looked up suddenly and noticed several eyes handing in the air, all starring at her. She began to cry and squeezed her right hand. Her mother felt the squeeze on her hand, and turned to her. Hannah was obviously uncomfortable in the room of the eyes. Her constant movement was distracting to the other tourists in the room, most of whose feet she had kicked against. She led Hannah gently out of the room.

This is my entry for the Fox Tales contest by @vermillionfox. She also provided the picture

Coming up with a story was kinda hard. What do you make of it? Think it matches the prompt (picture above)?

Share your thoughts with me

Thanks for reading

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