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Lentamente la gota de lluvia desciende junto a sus hermanas, hasta golpear el cristalino de mis ojos, estoy perdido.

¿Lentamente?, se requiere una gran velocidad para cruzar el vasto cielo y su fondo azul, sin embargo, mis sentidos agudos pueden percibir como nunca antes las conexiones de mi cuerpo con la materia que lo rodea.

Siento que no soy yo, que soy parte del todo, mi existencia está conjugada con la naturaleza verde y fresca, el aliento con alas de alas de mosquito; los latidos del corazón y el canto de mil cigarras se confunden en una sola canción, mientras que la piel y el musgo se vuelven uno.

El tiempo ya no es el tiempo, se puede doblar, se puede sentir como el calor del sol que se mezcla con mi cuerpo al dejarlo, fusionándose en un abrazo eterno y cálido.

No hay un túnel luminoso, no hay voces de liras que me llamen, solo dos manchas de sangre en mi tobillo que me recuerdan al veneno de la víbora ... dos gotas que se mezclan con el agua, que me mezclan con la naturaleza salvaje.

  • "La materia no se crea ni se destruye, solo se transforma" *

Antoine-Laurent de Lavoisier


Espero que te haya gustado mi debut en el concurso de micro-ficción organizado por @jayna.

Si desea participar, consulte las reglas del concurso aquí

Quiero agradecer a mi amigo @salvao por invitarme a participar, aprovecho la oportunidad para invitar a mis amigos a su vez: @johanfrare y @mllg a que también participen.

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Hi @karupanocitizen. I do not know Spanish, but I've run the content through Google translate. I've posted the translation below. It's a very nice philosophical piece. I like this line:

Time is no longer time, it can bend, it can feel like the heat of the sun that mixes with my body when leaving it, merging in an eternal and warm embrace.

Translation:

Slowly the drop of rain descends next to his sisters, until hitting the lens of my eyes, I am lost.

Slowly, it requires a great speed to cross the vast sky and its blue background, however, my acute senses can perceive as never before the connections of my body with the matter that surrounds it.

I feel that it is not me, that I am part of the whole, my existence is conjugated with the green and fresh nature, the breath with wings of mosquito wings; The beating of the heart and the song of a thousand cicadas are confused in a single song, while the skin and the moss become one.

Time is no longer time, it can bend, it can feel like the heat of the sun that mixes with my body when leaving it, merging in an eternal and warm embrace.

There is not a luminous tunnel, there are no voices of lyres that call me, only two bloodstains on my ankle that remind me of the venom of the viper ... two drops that mix with the water, that mix me with the wild nature .

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